SS : Aienkien ... Part 1 updated, page 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: goldstar678

Well Ragini and simple are same sides of coin and always in your stories i dont know its just a co incidence or you think about it,but the background is always simple which actually goes very well with Ragini.

I liked it very much espicially her state of mind, even though they are dating from past many months,but seeing Nachiket from very close before,she still have a little doubt which comes back to her mind,if she is doing right thing by committing to him.

Its a battle between heart and brain.Hehe.

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Pavan. 😊

I actually associate simplicity with Ragini, hence the attempt to keep things simple. Have also noticed that personally I can't write about grandeur, I have to exert myself a lot. Hence to make things eay, I keep things easy. He he

For Ragini, it has been a conflcit alright. Not that she didn't love Nachiket, but the feeling if he was indeed right for her and vice versa, given the vast diferences in their social strata, lifestyle, way of thinking etc.

BTW, love the siggy you are using.

I can totally understand Ragini scary thoughts as they are pole apart in every sense and she also saw how he was before.

i chorified the Siggy from Twitter.im still not able to take away my eyes from that siggy.It was such such such beautiful scene and mind blowing performance by RR and PK.

Best scene of IKNMP

Agree, the scene was so good, simple yet powerful and honest in it's intentions.

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Just read the Part 1!

I love Mumbai, whatever I have seen but this place you've described so beautifully looks just perfect. So they are already hopelessly in love with each other. to difficult to think of life without the other then why speculate life?

Her intuition seems like the twist in the story. 😆

I like it! Bring it on!!

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

Superb! The way you explained her feelings..I felt what Ragini must be feeling. Her intuition that they may separate and she may have to lead a life without him was so scary..that what if ached my heart. She was right with that. She couldn't imagine a next week without him. Who knew she would have to manage her life for 15 years without her love.
But as Nachiket entered the picture, it then soothed the heart. Gave assurance that no matter what, they are destined to be together. Their love wouldn't let them stay away..bound to be together.
Kudos! Awesome!

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Dear.

Glad you liked it. It's actually a very simple story of how they get togtehr despite the differences.

The Powai lake area is indeed beautiful and there are crocodiles in the water 😕

Simplicity works best!!
Ab crocodiles kaha jaye bichare, 😆 will have to check this place when I visit next. Thanks.

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Simplicity works best!!
Ab crocodiles kaha jaye bichare, 😆 will have to check this place when I visit next. Thanks.

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Ragini ... my previous response to you didn't get posted ... God knows why!

The what if part is very important to any relationship, I guess. There are doubts soemtimes, when we are too deep into a relationship. Becasue we don't want to lose it ever.

Yes agree! They love each other THAT much that a mere thought of losing each other scares them so much. I'm waiting for their romantic conversation now..please hurry 😃

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Narges.

I just hope I have enough perseverance likke Ragini ands you and carry this story ahead for a while, at least for a few parts.