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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ronitfan

ahahahaha you ROCK!!! 🤗🤗🤗
Just read the updated version.. your descriptions and settings are always so beautiful..
I am always transported right there.. where they are...

Thank you😳

Thank you. 😊

Others seem to be upset with the initial post and/ or in la la land😊

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Sam

@RonitPallaviNR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Oh u updated.. I shall acknowledge now. Let me read

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Sam

@RonitPallaviNR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Dude that was so cute. This was exactly the way I had imagined their dates to have been. So in love, this went so well w the way Ragini described their love. This was perfect. Loved it. Love u for this. I miss them! Omg, my babies are the cutest

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR
Dude that was so cute. This was exactly the way I had imagined their dates to have been. So in love, this went so well w the way Ragini described their love. This was perfect. Loved it. Love u for this. I miss them! Omg, my babies are the cutest

Thanks Sweetie 😊. Glad you liked it.

I tried to keep it simple, the way their love is.

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Sam

@RonitPallaviNR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Sweetie😊. Glad you liked it.

I tried to keep it simple, the way their love is.

Yup it's so real 😳

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR

Yup it's so real 😳

REAL is them 😳

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Now what do I say about this and about you...

An amazing piece of talent from an even more amazing writer.

Love this shade of NeiRa. Dil maange more!

Lovely! 😳

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goldstar678

@goldstar678

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Well Ragini and simple are same sides of coin and always in your stories i dont know its just a co incidence or you think about it,but the background is always simple which actually goes very well with Ragini.

I liked it very much espicially her state of mind, even though they are dating from past many months,but seeing Nachiket from very close before,she still have a little doubt which comes back to her mind,if she is doing right thing by committing to him.

Its a battle between heart and brain.Hehe.

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Superb! The way you explained her feelings..I felt what Ragini must be feeling. Her intuition that they may separate and she may have to lead a life without him was so scary..that what if ached my heart. She was right with that. She couldn't imagine a next week without him. Who knew she would have to manage her life for 15 years without her love.
But as Nachiket entered the picture, it then soothed the heart. Gave assurance that no matter what, they are destined to be together. Their love wouldn't let them stay away..bound to be together.
Kudos! Awesome!

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: metoyou
Now what do I say about this and about you...

An amazing piece of talent from an even more amazing writer.
Love this shade of NeiRa. Dil maange more!

Lovely! 😳

Thanks Narges.

I just hope I have enough perseverance likke Ragini ands you and carry this story ahead for a while, at least for a few parts.