SS: When Fate Strikes..! Part 3 (3/8/15) - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

18

Views

3.8k

Users

12

Likes

44

Frequent Posters

RaginiJoshi thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Hey hello! First of all welcome to the forum:)
You write in such a beautiful way! The story is definitely interesting. I am waiting for your next update:)
BlueMoon8 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Very well written .. You gave a Good emotional touch to the events ...
That was a really good turn of events happening in your story .. It will be worth a watch how Nachiket reacts to all this.. How he feels to find the love of his life in such a state... What if something happens to his Ragini..

Please give a name to your story ... How about .. " A tryst with Death "

Do continue soon ... Keep writing ..😊
Edited by Blue_Moon824 - 10 years ago
Impossible.Girl thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Aww...emotional update.
You write wonderfully dear
Please do continue soon.
Eagerly waiting to know what happens to Ragini
ronitfan thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Please write more more more :D
Soon!!
MissRight thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#15

He didn't know how long he stood there. It could have been seconds, days, years; he saw everything but did not comprehend anything. He could physically see his two kids stop dead in their tracks as they, too, heard the lady in the white coat, and then snap into reality and take swift steps to stand beside his first-born, take her and he better-half into hugs- seeking and providing comfort, but other than this, he couldn't process.

His life flashed before his eyes. SHE flashed before his eyes. Why wouldn't she, she was his life! From the first moment, that first meet, their childish fights when she cared for dada-ji, the way she comforted him after his grandfather's death, her care, her concern, her going away, realising her worth in his life, meeting her again, wooing her, romancing her, marrying her, loving her, leaving her and meeting again. Every look, every smile, every word spoken, every moment shared, ALL of it. And one question: Would he get the chance to live it again?

*-*-*-*-*-*-*

She observed the scene before her. She saw three very upset children of the woman inside that room, embraced tightly like interlocked fingers. Her heart went out to them, for she did realise the worth that woman inside the ICU held.. not only for them but to every single person who that woman had encountered in her life. She had been the ray of hope for so many people! Herself included... possibly near the very top of the list. There was so much that the now-a-leading-intern Dr Rhea Malhotra owed to Ragini Patel, for God knows that she might not even have been alive, had it not been for the woman who now lay bandaged in that white room! "please Ragini Dii! Wake up! You can't do this to us! You just can't!"

*-*-*-*-*-*-*

It could have been a lifetime before he moved, before he regained consciousness in the world of the living. Shattered beyond belief at this turn of events, he had slipped into a coma of his own, where he was awake, yet asleep; looked at everything yet didn't see anything; hearing things yet not listening to anything. Simply put, Nachiket Khanna was a mess. The Mister Perfect, I-always-have-everything-under-control was now losing it.. and he had no idea how to stop. Well actually, maybe one thing could stop it!

And unknown to the 6 worried-to-death people outside that door the "thing" was happening, as Ragini came back to world of the living!



I Know I know! Its been a long time.. and this is not a long enough update... Its actually just a filler.. I'm writing the next part and this wait will not be long.. PROMISE!!! Please do like and comment! Criticism appreciated!

I'm sorry but I'm not sending out any PMs!


Lots of Love! ❤️

neiralove thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wow! I hadn't seen this one before, so I just finished reading all 3 parts 😊
The way you handled Nachiket's care for Ragini was amazing--him hesitating to call her, his heart rising to his throat when he hears that she is in the hospital--just brilliant! I'm so glad she's not in a coma; that would have been so painful for poor Nachiket.

Please update soon! I can't wait to see (read?) Nachiket's expression when he finds out she's ok! 😳
ronitfan thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Aww!!
Thank you SO MUCH for continuing this.. really beautiful..
I understand the difficulty of continuing a story after a long gap because I did so recently but this was a really nice bridge to build on to the next bit.. these two idiots really need something as tectonic as this to make them realise the worth of each other..

Lovely.. enjoyed reading it and eagerly awaiting your next update :)
Lots of love!
JB-US thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
You are amazing!!!! This story was very well constructed and I like this character of dr. Rhea. I just finished reading all 3 parts and to say the very least was thoroughly impressed by this story. Please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter.
AngelsFlyAlone thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Plzzz update this its luvly!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".