SS: When Fate Strikes..! Part 3 (3/8/15)

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She walked aimlessly on the road. Vehicles whizzed past her like a blur. But she was oblivious. Totally lost. Of course, what other reaction would one someone expect of her though? That too now? She, whose heart had not only been broken but smashed; crushed into a million uncountable pieces. Uncountable and unable to be collected, forget being put back together?

Why though? Why do people hold this much of power over us? Why do people we love hold this much of power over us? Why does LOVE hold this much of power over us? Especially over her, and that too after breaking through the shield she had put up to prevent heart-break... once was enough, she had thought... and then built a steel wall around her heart so nobody would ever be able to break it again... Alas, not everything goes as per our plan. Life would be so much easier if it did wouldn't it?

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Unfortunately, medicine says that being "dead" is when someone is brain-dead (I'm not 100% sure but this is what I required for this story..) not heart-dead (does that even make sense 😛). Had it been in regards to the heart, Ragini Patel would have been declared dead a few hours ago! But it's also true that the intensity of the pain of a heart-break can stop the brain from functioning properly. And I guess looking at but not seeing the car come full force at her was an example of that... but right now, it was too late for her to try and comprehend about the thought or any mysteries of life... for her body's instinct right now said to try to live!

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Tring Tring... Tring Tring...

"Hello"

"Hello Nachiket beta?"

"Maa..? Itni raat gaye phone kiya? Sab theek to hai na?"

"Kya tumhari Ragini se koi baat huyi hai? Pichle kuch ghanton mein?"

"Nahi maa... kyun kya hua? Sab theek to hai na? Kya Ragini abhi tak ghar nahi aayi?"

"Vo... vo... kuch nahi.. sorry tumhe pareshaan kiya. Rakhti hoon."

"lekin maa---"

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"Nachiket se bhi koi baat nahi huyi Sunny Tai.. Ab mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi hai. Pata nahi kahan gayi hai? Sava 11 (11:15) baj rahe hain aur ab tak ghar nahi aayi. Pehle itni late kabhi nahi kiya au raga late huyi to phone zaroor karti thi!"

"Vo gayi bi to kharaab mode mein hai na..! thoda time akele maangta...!"

"pata nahi kahan hai! Bas jahan bhi ho theek ho!"

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"Dr Mehra! How is she now?" an anxious voice rang in the empty corridors. A visibly upset woman, in her late-twenties strode towards the doctor in question in front of the OT.

"Rhea... Major accident tha. Sir pe kafi chotein aayi hain aur internal injuries bhi hain. Next 72 hours bahut crutial hain. Agar hosh aata hai to very good but it not, she might slip into coma. I'm sorry."

Rhea's heart sank as she processed her senior's words. COMA?! "I understand Dr... thank you"

Dr Mehra placed a calming hand on Rhea's arm and left after giving her a sympathetic nod. Gathering her emotions, Rhea let the past couple of hours flow through her mind. Life has such a great potential to build up or come crashing down in just a few moments..! She remembered the first time she had encountered Ragini Patel. Roles had been reversed then, she was the one on the hospital bed. She relived her relationship with her Ragini Dii that they had built over almost 10 years. She was not unknown to Ragini's history. Infact, she knew about it in a great depth, possibly the deepest anyone other than Ragini's family has ever been. It was then that a though struck her... why wasn't anybody from Ragini's family here?

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PART 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/itna-karo-na-mujhe-pyaar/4357790/ss-when-fate-strikes-part-3-3-8-15

PART 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125400716

Welcome to the forum and welcome back to writing :)

Nice start to the story... with the accident and Nachiket-Ashaben worrying.. please write more soon.. can't wait to read what happens next!

Very Unique thought...

U must continue with this story line...

Waiting for the next update

Nachiket-Ashaben convo and Ragini acciednt was good

Very well written.

Please continue soon

This is such a nice SS to begin the day with. Hopefully you will update it sooner.

So Ragini is in an accident t and nobody knows where she is. This Rhea character is also pretty intriguing, especially her relation with Ragini.

Please update soon.

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Somebody stop this annoying tone... gosh shut up shut up shut up... Can't be morning yet... too soon!' thoughts ran through her mind in a jumbled train.

"Band karo na isse," a croaky voice said beside her, "jaldi!!!"

"Haan Haan," she replied, finally coming to her senses, and realising it was her phone and not the alarm clock. She opened her eyes slowly, blinking rapidly, overcoming their natural reaction to close back. Yeah, they weren't too happy at being opened at half one in the night!

She pressed accept without bothering to look at the caller ID... too much work!

"hello? Kaun bol raha hai?"

"Nishi? It's me.. Rhea!"

"Rhea dii?? Itni raat ko?"

"I know Nishi and I'm sorry... but tumhe abhi issi waqt City Hospital aana hoga! Ragini Dii ka accident ho gaya hai.. she's critical! Maine ghar pe phone karne ki koshish ki but ghar ka phone engaged hai aur Aarav otha nahi raha!"

"WHAT?! Maa ka accident? Kab... Kaise? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai?!"

"Tum please pehle yahan aao! Zyaada sawaal mat pooch aur ghar pe batao please!"

"OK! Main abhi aati hoon"

She put the phone down with shaking hands. "Neesi? Kya hua?" a now-very-awake Jignesh asked from her right.

Recovering from her shock and starting to worry, Nishi turned to her husband, "maa ka accident ho gaya hai Jignesh... Humein jaana hoga! Tum taiyaar ho jao.. Main baa ko bata ke aati hoon!"

They jumped out of the bed and rushed like bats out of hell. While Nishi told a very worried baa about the happenings, and informed her that they'd have to leave immediately with promises to update regularly, Jignesh slipped on suitable clothes and grabbed the essentials (I know seems too dramatic but it's an indian soap.. iske bina adhoora rahega! ;)) They both rushed out of the house scared sick with both their phones in their hands trying to reach their family... all the while praying for the woman who was the light of all the family members' life!

Darn! Why wasn't anyone picking up?! Suddenly Nishi's luck shone as a sleepy voice answered "Hello?"

"Hello Suhani? City hospital abhi! Mom ka accident ho gaya hai!"

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He tossed in his bed for the thousandth time that night.. he just couldn't fall asleep! Ever since Ma's phone call, a strange feeling had settled over his heart. Like something wasn't right.

Finally giving up on trying to not care, he picked up his phone for the sixth time and dialled the number, this time, letting it ring and not disconnecting on the first ring. No response. Dialling again, he waited to hear her voice trying to calm down. He knew she'd be angry... after all it was 1am! And he had no right to be calling her at this hour... Not after 15 years of silence! No response again. As he pressed redial and waited for the rings to finish, his anxiety started to get the better of him. He searched for Dr Aman's number from his contacts list and pressed dial. He waited as it connected and then as it rang but, oh, surprise surprise, no answer!

"Ye Dr Aman bhi ajeeb hi hain.. Phone uthaun ya na uthaun, is mein bhi confused hi honge," his almost non-audible whisper broke the silence of the room. But the feeble attempt at calming himself down did not do it's magic. "ye Ragini phone kyun nahi utha rahi? Ek aur baar try karta hoon!" (BTW, he knows about the fake-marriage)

But before his fingers could tap the woman in question's name, a loud scream rang through his house, "DAD! AGHAM! DAD!?"

He rushed out of is room to see Agham run out of his and then to see a sobbing Suhani stand with her phone in her hand. "kya hua Suhani? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?"

Nachiket walked towards Suhani who was now hyperventilating, trying to speak but unable to, and Agham who was standing beside his sister, rubbing her back, trying to calm her down.

"Da-Dad! Mo..mo...mom ka accident ho gaya hai!"

"KYA?" came the combined voice of Agham and Nachiket.

"Nishi didi ka phone aaya tha... City hospital.. we have to go, dad! Please!"

And all hell broke loose! Rushing to his room to grab his keys, Nachiket ran down the stairs, taking two at a time with Agham and Suhani hot on his heels! With his heart in his throat, Nachiket was barely able to concentrate on his actions. Only one thought struck his mind and stuck to the front: "RAGINI!"

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Knock knock knock

3 sharp knock echoed in the room, magnifying in effect due to the late hour at night. Dr Mehra looked up in surprised and softly said come in as she saw who it was through the glass doors. Rhea walked in and curved her lips into a barely there smile in front of her senior.

"Dr Rhea? Is everything ok?"

"Yes Dr Mehra..! Actually I wanted a favour?"

"kahiye Dr Rhea? How can I help you?!"

"Dr Mehra... May I please be assigned Ragini Patel's case?"

"But Rhea...-"

"I know Dr! Yes I do know her personally as well and this is why I want her case. I don't mean any offence but I think sirf main hi is case ko sambhal sakti hoon. Dr Mehra, this case requires not only medical effort but a little bit of personal involvement too! I know Ragini ji and though I cannot disclose the story as it isn't mine to tell, I know that it is the main reason for her current situation. So please, I request you to let me handle this case!"

"OK Rhea! I have a feeling that this goes much deeper than it appears. So you may handle the case. But I want you working with someone else as a team on this case! That way we'll not be breaking any rules of the hospital but only bending them a bit!"

"Absolutely Dr Mehra! I'm ready! And thank you so much!"

"You're welcome."

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"Miss Ragini Patel? Unka accident hua hai?" a very breathless voice asked the reception.

"Aap kaun?" returned the stern voice.

"Main unki--" "NISHI!"

She turned around sharply and rushed towards the familiar face. Taking her hands in her own, she hurriedly asked, "Rhea Di... Ye sab kya ho raha hai?! Mom ka accident...?"

"Please calm down Nishi! Main night shift pe thi aur break pe jaa rahi thi jab ambulance ki side se nikalte waqt meri nazar Ragini di pe padi. Apparently, road ke beech mein chal kisi car k saath accident hua aur aas paas log hone ki wajah se jaldi hospital pahuncha diya gaya which was a good thing because it's a major accident Nishi. Vo ab ICU mein hain and agle 72 hours bahut critical hain! She must regain consciousness.. or she might slip into Coma!"

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Rushing through the hospital corridors, Nachiket, Agham and Suhani searched for ICU number 3. Suddenly, a very familiar lock of hair caught Agham's sight. "Nishi," he breathed and pointed. She seemed to be talking to someone. The trio rushed towards the little group and caught on to the last few words spoken.

"Vo ab ICU mein hain and agle 72 hours bahut critical hain! She must regain consciousness.. or she might slip into Coma!"

Nachiket stopped dead in his tracks as his brain processed the words he had spoken or heard uncountable times... for his patients... Not a loved one... Especially never the one he lived for!

"72 hours bahut critical hain" "she might slip into coma"

"Critical" "coma"

And just like that.. his world came crashing down!

Dont forget to comment! Much Love... :)

I am now so excited to know what happens next - whetehr Ragini comes out of the crticial phase or she slips into Coma

Please do update soon.