And it all came tumbling down: The Separation OS: Part 7 Updated - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are doing just great, loved reading all the parts.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6...go my god! you have introduced the nerve that has been bothering Ragini all the time... Him not explaining play a major role in the insecurities...But will explanation be enough...Trust is tough! Love your flow of writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A very beautiful take on the show. Eloquently written and a stunner. Continue soon, and do keep me in the loop.

:)

NIV.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot Sukhi, Surbhi, d3c3nt, JazzyM, Niv!
Means a lot to me!

Part 7 is up for you guys 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7...aha! the cracks are appearing. i really loved the way you had written about him spatting at Ragini...he didn't mean it but all the tension related to a patient and being questioned, just blew him off...well written. 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Part 7...aha! the cracks are appearing. i really loved the way you had written about him spatting at Ragini...he didn't mean it but all the tension related to a patient and being questioned, just blew him off...well written. 👏👏👏


Hehe, thanks!
One FB coming up soon. :P
Hopefully the sane kinds 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheTVAficionado


Hehe, thanks!
One FB coming up soon. :P
Hopefully the sane kinds 😆


Bringing it on...i'm anticipating some awesome penning... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh God. it was a superb update, got my heart beating fast.
OMG, I need another update please. This is superb.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7 Great update.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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And the fight begins!
Why they have to fight man, just tell them to kiss and makeup :/
But ofcourse ladaai toh karni hai -__- Loved the starting, ragini reads love stories XD Are you sure its not a "Romantic Thriller" haha just kidding actually i don't want them to fight basically.
Make them fight or anything but do happy endings pls :)
Its just a susgestion ofcourse! :)
I felt here nachiket should've behaved a bit normal, he said some really harsh words! And now we should have a baby shower yay more kids coming!

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