And it all came tumbling down: The Separation OS: Part 7 Updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: poetic

Ok, loved the second part. Pl continue ASAP.

Nice interplay of head and heart ... beautiful !

Originally posted by: ManiChakr

so beautifully written. maata could have simply lifted this story and shown in fb...

looking frwd to read more from u..

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Wow wow wow!

You have a way with words :)

Really enjoyed reading it..

all those links with the past and the perfect timeline..

Ragini and Nachiket are so perfect in this..

lovely.. cannot wait to read how you envision their separation..

Originally posted by: poetic

So beautiful third part. I think I am stuck on the word 'beautiful'

This is such an elegant way of portraying their Love Story. Epic.

Originally posted by: TheTVAficionado

Sukhii!:D

Thanks so much.😳

I will come up with one more part before I sleep. 😉

Originally posted by: TheTVAficionado

I like that you're stuck on that one word.😛