And it all came tumbling down: The Separation OS: Part 7 Updated

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TheTVAficionado

@TheTVAficionado

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: poetic
Ok, loved the second part. Pl continue ASAP.
Nice interplay of head and heart ... beautiful !

Thanks Rachna😃😃

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TheTVAficionado

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ManiChakr

so beautifully written. maata could have simply lifted this story and shown in fb...
looking frwd to read more from u..

Haha, Thanks!

I wouldn't have minded actually.😆

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow wow wow!

You have a way with words :)

Really enjoyed reading it..

all those links with the past and the perfect timeline..

Ragini and Nachiket are so perfect in this..

lovely.. cannot wait to read how you envision their separation..

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TheTVAficionado

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Wow wow wow!
You have a way with words :)

Really enjoyed reading it..
all those links with the past and the perfect timeline..

Ragini and Nachiket are so perfect in this..
lovely.. cannot wait to read how you envision their separation..

Sukhii!:D

Thanks so much.😳

I will come up with one more part before I sleep. 😉

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

So beautiful third part. I think I am stuck on the word 'beautiful'

This is such an elegant way of portraying their Love Story. Epic.

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TheTVAficionado

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: poetic
So beautiful third part. I think I am stuck on the word 'beautiful'
This is such an elegant way of portraying their Love Story. Epic.

I like that you're stuck on that one word.😛