And it all came tumbling down: The Separation OS: Part 7 Updated - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So wished that the creatives would've showed those monologues which you showed here for ragini and nachiket! There characters are portrayed in much better light, can be understood well and hey they do really speak logic :D
I can somehow relate to both of them, they are human after all! They would be having some thing in them which they would find hard to ignore, ragini has her insecurities while nachiket has ego, he doesn't care to explain and she doesn't fail to doubt on him.
Now rupali has entered in the frame! Lets see for the next part i am sure you will do extreme justice to it, much better explaination than the real one. I am just saying from my past encounters with your writing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for updating the 5th part. We all needed it so badly.
Like the other parts, this one also has a simple steady flow to it. It portrays a very real life situation in a couple's life. And finally, we have Rupali's entry.

Now, waiting for the next part eagerly to know what the message was for Nachiket.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the 5th part - lovely timing as Rachna said.. we all really needed some sanity that has N-R <3

Good way to start R's negativity and doubts regarding Nachiket and establishing his hands off policy when it comes to explaining the truth.. awaiting the next part eagerly!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur


So wished that the creatives would've showed those monologues which you showed here for ragini and nachiket! There characters are portrayed in much better light, can be understood well and hey they do really speak logic :D
I can somehow relate to both of them, they are human after all! They would be having some thing in them which they would find hard to ignore, ragini has her insecurities while nachiket has ego, he doesn't care to explain and she doesn't fail to doubt on him.
Now rupali has entered in the frame! Lets see for the next part i am sure you will do extreme justice to it, much better explaination than the real one. I am just saying from my past encounters with your writing :)


Thanks so much surbhimathur😉
Just writing what I wish they'd have shown.
Now the whole story is actually beginning, two years worth of matter to follow soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Sukhi and Rachna! 😳
Part 6 is up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmmm ... 6th opart. So that's how Rupali comes into their life?
She is Pam's friend, as we all thought . And yes, she has her antennae trained on N. And the guy that he is, he cannot turn off the happiness he gets with all the admiration and attention! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Hmmm ... 6th opart. So that's how Rupali comes into their life?

She is Pam's friend, as we all thought . And yes, she has her antennae trained on N. And the guy that he is, he cannot turn of the happiness he gets with all the admiration and attention! 😆


Yes. 😛
Not giving bichara Nachiket 20 girlfriends here 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheTVAficionado


Yes. 😛
Not giving bichara Nachiket 20 girlfriends here 😆


Sure 😆 Thanks.

he indeed seemed to have a whole battalion of GFs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Peck on his cheek?
aww :)

hahahaha can totally imagine this happening and Nachiket the natural flirt not giving it much bhaav.. I think Nachiket was always more comfortable with being physical while Ragini was not.. not even after she committed to Nachiket..

Thanks for updating so soon! Enjoyed reading it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 6:
It was superbb! You penned it so amazingly, like those last three lines changed the whole meaning of your update and made it more awesome! I know that the story has just caught its momentum and its too early to predict whether the ending's gonna be happy or sad but this update was worth it man.
I loved it! That rupali, hahaha such a gum man! Nevertheless nachiket is all ragini's, no rupali shefali or laali

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