And it all came tumbling down: The Separation OS: Part 7 Updated - Page 3

Originally posted by: TheTVAficionado

Hehe, thanks! 😊

I am so mad at whatever they've shown, so I'm just going to stick with my version of things.😳

He thinks the baby has made their bond stronger but its the reverse, she has more insecurities...I love the way you penned that emotion...well done.

Originally posted by: d3c3nt

Beautiful. This really gives the feeling of their love. Ah!!!!!

Thanks and keep on writing.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

He thinks the baby has made their bond stronger but its the reverse, she has more insecurities...I love the way you penned that emotion...well done.

impatient now...

The friends POV...lets see where it goes...interesting story path

Wow..

Awesome sauce that's how I describe Part 4.

Wow. Simply wow!
It was like i was reading a story, very smooth. It was a pleasure to read every part, to get to understand their story, your story. I liked the way flashbacks were penned, super adorable and amazing in their own way. The insecurities building up inside her, veryy nicely penned, it didn't showed her negative in any way and i appreciate your writing here. Karan and dimpy are cutiepies! And that last line "Nachiket smiled at his wife proudly. He knew he'd picked the right girl."
Nailed it ya^
Waiting for the next! 😊

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Wow. Simply wow!
It was like i was reading a story, very smooth. It was a pleasure to read every part, to get to understand their story, your story. I liked the way flashbacks were penned, super adorable and amazing in their own way. The insecurities building up inside her, veryy nicely penned, it didn't showed her negative in any way and i appreciate your writing here. Karan and dimpy are cutiepies! And that last line "Nachiket smiled at his wife proudly. He knew he'd picked the right girl."
Nailed it ya^
Waiting for the next! 😊