Vignette Series - Marasim Part 2 pg 12 - Updated - Page 10

Originally posted by: *Dev.*

Hi R:)

Okay this time I have read your part 2 on time and I must say, that it was in flow with part 1 and that is how it gets beautiful with the memories when Nachiket remembers it. Though Ragini was nowhere but still by your descriptions, you made us feel of her presence. Sunny Tai was reluctant to ask Nachiket ;) anyway, she do play a major role in their life.

It was simple yet very convincing. 👏🤗

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

That was amazing! I am so liking this idea of Nachiket moving to Ragini's place. Beautifully written! Keep it up😃

Originally posted by: ronitfan

That was so natural.. it was like shadowing Nachiket when it actually happened.. and yay for bringing in Sunny tai in the story - makes it all the more fun! :D

Wonder what surprise she's hatching with nani!

Loveddd it.. I want a sleepy Nachiket I can leave notes for, too! <3

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Ragini. Hope you are done with your journals and stuff, so that we get the update at the earliest. 😳

Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy!

As usual, this was very well written!

I really love the way you wrote his emotions out. I could feel his relief at being back, yet the hesitancy he still has.

But what I loved the most was the Cube that Ragini left for him on top of to note. It is a small thing, but it means so much.

I got a smile on my face after reading that as well!

What do I even say.

I really enjoyed this!

Not to mention how much I liked that you included Sunny Tai in this. She's cute hahaa. Really good job with this one!

I loved the length too ;) :P

Take caaare and keep writing :D