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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iamcurious

I like the slow setting into routine and bringing back old memories in form of notes and gifts. 👏Sunny Tai is a savior both here and in the show. I love her lively character, initially found it OTT but now its all good.

The awkwardness is there, its always the beginning to full blown romance.

Ever wondered whats going in each one's mind when the two just look into each others eyes and have thousands of things to say? 😳

What is Nani's plan btw? 😆


I also find Sunny Tai overbearing sometimes, but overall she's a good and kind character. Hence, she is here to stay.

Two other characters that deserve so more are Karan and Dimpy - they have such potential and I mean in a good way, not in yesterday's lousy Hospital scene. But I liked them in the FB - they were so cute 😆 Come to think of it, those two have been together since they were in college, since when Neil used to change GFs like handkerchiefs.

Coming back to the story, thanks a lot for reading. Hope you are better now. I think you mentioned that you were unwell in between.

In this short series, I am just trying to see how their lives could be if they decide to take the step ahead. Hence, there will be no heavy indulging in fake marriage revelation and stuff, though there will be glimpses. I just hope everything makes sense eventually.

As per me, the awkwardness will be there. They were separated not by others; they had decided on separating themselves, so there will be lots of moments when the past will come into play. And frankly speaking, I can''t handle it all. 😆 It's gonna be mind boggling.

About your question - most of the time I wonder about the same. Why don't you write something really beautiful on that?

As for Naani, it's something very simple. LOL
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic


I also find Sunny Tai overbearing sometimes, but overall she's a good and kind character. Hence, she is here to stay.

Two other characters that deserve so more are Karan and Dimpy - they have such potential and I mean in a good way, not in yesterday's lousy Hospital scene. But I liked them in the FB - they were so cute 😆 Come to think of it, those two have been together since they were in college, since when Neil used to change GFs like handkerchiefs.

Actually, Karan and Dimpy are potential characters than just stand by ppl. Yup, infact it seems like they mus have knocked some brains into Neil's head to select Ragini and settle down with her...they seem lot wiser than these two in terms of relationships. I hope the actors get a chance to live their characters.


Coming back to the story, thanks a lot for reading. Hope you are better now. I think you mentioned that you were unwell in between.
Still unwell, medicines helping though. Thank you for the concern 😊


In this short series, I am just trying to see how their lives could be if they decide to take the step ahead. Hence, there will be no heavy indulging in fake marriage revelation and stuff, though there will be glimpses. I just hope everything makes sense eventually.
Keep it simple and it works ...ALWAYS! So you'll do great no worries 😃

As per me, the awkwardness will be there. They were separated not by others; they had decided on separating themselves, so there will be lots of moments when the past will come into play. And frankly speaking, I can''t handle it all. 😆 It's gonna be mind boggling.
😆 😆 Its more fun that way. I want to see how they handle the pressure. Can't blame so have to gulp it down.

About your question - most of the time I wonder about the same. Why don't you write something really beautiful on that?
I didn't see that coming, warna nahi poochti mein 😆
Though, I feel they could be writing some diary and there all the emotions can just flow


As for Naani, it's something very simple. LOL
Bring it on. I love Nanis in this show, bombs! 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
So Nani's the Bomb. 😆
Let's see how these two handle pressure now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey rachna watsup! Sorry i had already read this part but didn't comment as i was busy.
But before that, that's some cool shit you've put in your siggy box! I loved it.
This update really had ragini into it man, more than nachiket, okay like that way, you know what i mean right? If no then chuck it and if yes then Hi5.
It was really essential to see this part of the story, like how he is acting in her house without her presence around him. After 15 years how he's feeling and most importantly how both of them are dealing with this sudden change. So that cube thing was cute! Lol sunny tai rocks man, i love that lady! She has those guts you see, but ofcourse nani wins it all in the end. _/\_ 😆
But that part was so good when sunny tai hesitantly suggested him to have lunch and was little anxious about his answer but he being the gentleman, accepted it so kind-heartedly! I really liked it.
Then the phone call ofcourse, not bomb^ but atomic bomb! hahaha
Keep writing! And i really want to see what got them together after 15 years!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Surbhi,
Thanks a lot for your comment. 😆

About the siggy, I love it. 😉

As for N and R here in this segment, agree with you totally. 😳

As for the next part, it will have to wait now. I am the other desperate end of motivation.

I guess, we all need time to heal and then nurture.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

Hi Surbhi,

Thanks a lot for your comment.😆

About the siggy, I love it.😉

As for N and R here in this segment, agree with you totally.😳

As for the next part, it will have to wait now. I am the other desperate end of motivation.

I guess, we all need time to heal and then nurture.



I got that heal and nurture thing ^
Take your time :)
And your welcome rachna :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rachnaaa!!
This is so good!
Read both parts.
And needless to say, they put a smile on my face.
Update soon!😉

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