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Posted: 10 years ago
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Neil stood before the window...with a glass in one hand...and stared blank at the night sky...
His hazel eyes lost in d utter darkness...dotted with some glitters...

He cud think of nothing else. ...apart from a pair of...painfully watered eyes. ...

... roney ki kya zaroorat thi use? Waise to kitni strong dikhti hai...lekin aaj tak rona bandh nhi hua...

He was. ...restless. ..pretty much. ...he kept his glass on the table with a bang...and went to sit on his bed...but got up again. ...
No...he was not feeling well. ...

...kya zaroorat thi mujhe usse aise baat karne ki?...aur wo bhi...mujhse ladh sakti thi waapas...roney ki kya zaroorat thi use???...

He picked up the glass...again...and went to the window. ...

...pata nhi ghar pohuchi bhi ya nhi...ye dr aman pata nhi kya kar rahe hain...aise patiyon ko sirf pati ka naam chahiye. ...farz nibhana to aata nhi hai...

He stopped thinking. ...

He dropped himself in the couch...next to the window. ...

...ragini...aaj tak tumne mujhe buss ek hi tofa diya hai...kamzori... dekho! Aaj bhi main kamzor par raha hoon...sirf tumhari wajah se...

He closed his eyes. ...took a deep breath. ...

...kitni ajeeb baat hai na ragini? hum donon har roz kitne dilon ki marammati me sahayata karte hain...lekin khud kabhi...na to apne. ..na hi ek doosre k dil ko samajh paaye...

He got up again. ...went to d window. ..stared blank at d night sky...

...ladh sakti thi...jhagadh sakti thi...roney ki kya zaroorat thi? ?????????????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh this is so excellent at so many levels.
I loved it - small, simple, elegant and effective. Shows how Nachiket gets really affected by Ragini's tears.

His biggest and only weakness, perhaps. ❤️

Thank you 👏


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Posted: 10 years ago
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cute sweet & lovely
loved it "roney ki kia zaroorat thee : :p

very nice :) dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Short and yet so strikingly adorable. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kaushi!
That was absolutely beautiful.. thanks for writing it..
small yet so effective.. even I was thinking about his feelings.. how much he wanted her to fight back and spur with him.. this is the first time she gave up!

Lovely writing.. do write more! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww! M soo happy that u ppl liked it... I actually m very fond of writing one shots...or say half shots...hehehe...
So I will definitely write more...:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it KD..😳❤️ though i don't watch the show regularly but it's heart warming writing.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Kaushi---

Awww! M soo happy that u ppl liked it... I actually m very fond of writing one shots...or say half shots...hehehe...

So I will definitely write more...:-)


😆

We will then definitely wait for these Half Shots 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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O m g JJ!!!!!!:-):-):-):-):-):-):-)
I will try to write more poetic...whenever I get a situation that makes me think a lot...:-);-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dekha..hume jo cheez chahiye woh hum dhund lete hai..😎🤗

anyways keep writing KD..🤗 u do make ur index on this forum too.👍🏼

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