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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#631

lovely update... i like arnav's character...as akash mentioned he is Fair to everyone...i like how he does not want to interfere in shyam and anjali's life.

i hope the family does not go overboard and point out these changes to arnav and make him conscious.

eagerly waiting for the next!!

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ddda2006

@ddda2006

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Posted: 6 years ago

#632

this storyline is worth TV serial with good actors... will be fun to watch...

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

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Posted: 6 years ago

#633

Thank you for your comment. God you liked it. I know Arnav's past need to be revealed. However, it has to be by someone he trusts that building is on. Plus on a timeline all these events are around a 6 month timeframe. Arnav is now having a friend but is he really? Is he understanding? Some scars can be told some have to be probed and others found.

Since I have to concentrate on each it is going long. Everyone will help each other as we do in our lives though the spot light is on two.

Please have a little patience dear. And you didn't overstep at all.

Originally posted by: manju-ujnam
Wow! What a story.. I read all chapters in one go!!
I love that you are giving importance to all characters.. Shyaam, Nihaal, Akash, and Arnav..

It is like a full fledged story, not a fan fiction..

Can I ask you to reveal Arnav's past? I am sorry, if I am stepping into boundaries.. But it is like 38 chapters stretched.. and the suspense is still intact.. I have to give kudos to you, for that feat!

I enjoy the story.. I am joining the board!

Manju

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#634

Shyam needs to get moving if he wants Anjali. He hasn't quite made that decision yet though. Arnav is slowly coming out of his shell.

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#635

Wonderful update
Arnav following khushi's advice and same time teasing khushi to clear her sadness. Everyone noticing changes in arnav. Shyam needs to figure out what he wants.

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#636

loved the update...

it seems...shyam.. still haven't got the courage ... hope he will find it soon.. I really hope he soon realizes Anjali's value...and do something about it... u need more efforts man...

arnav is changing for good.. i love his grandmother...

i think.. she will be the first one to find out about Khushi also... ( is it )

though his mother loves him a lot.. his grandmother trusts him a lot..