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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Waiting.😉

Very soon, my dear.

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@Zeffy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios
You actually it was his mum? 😆

Come on Zef, beguiling love cannot be for a mum.

Only if my vocabulary was as expansive! So is there a Mrs Raizada that we will be introduced to?

Come on, Arnav has got to have more than two women influencing him - Di and the mystery person. Khushi cannot handle all the pressure, might as well have her work distributed. 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios
Zeffy, my love 🤗

Thank you for being there, your anecdotes makes me wanna write more.

Chapter 1, well this one will be a slow progress, but a progress nevertheless.

🤗 as much I love you, please don't encourage me. I go way overboard.

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@Zeffy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: pakpearl
Intriguing prologue...
Can't see Khushi like this..

Who is the owner of big black eyes??

Lavanya???

Hi pakpearl ji,

Don't you think Sheetal was beautiful enough as well? 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

Like Wedded, WA will have a professional entailing to the story. And I am gonna up the ante this time around.

Khushi Raizada is a mystery, and Arnav Raizada will have to unravel it. 😊

Caught you N. So Khushi does know Arnav from work? She was supposed to have a full-fledged career and things took a turn. Come on, he stated it in his monologue!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: poojasidd123
Such an amazing prologue! It aptly brought out the situation arshi is in without giving away too much. The intensity, the angst and emotions all are wonderfully reflected here. Arnav has been compelled to marry Khushi, a girl who he thinks is a misfit to his world. It seems she has been a confident woman prior to marriage but now reduced to being submissive. It remains to be seen what made them come together in matrimony. This Arnav is a huge change from.the one in Wedded. About Khushi, I'm waiting to see how much strong she is and why is she being so docile in front of him.

You have summarized things so well Pooja ji. 😊

Confident to docile, submissive - I think WA is going to be Khushi's journey out and out.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios
Love, lies, mystery,, intrigue, romance, business, rivalries, jealously, relationships and definitely affection, that is how my critic summed up WA. And I hope it pleases you all. 😃

This is going to be my mantra here on. Cracking your characters is really interesting. This time plot lines seems more appealing to decode.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Zeffy

Only if my vocabulary was as expansive! So is there a Mrs Raizada that we will be introduced to?
Come on, Arnav has got to have more than two women influencing him - Di and the mystery person. Khushi cannot handle all the pressure, might as well have her work distributed. 😆

This time around its gonna be an influence that works both ways. 😛

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Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Zeffy

Hi pakpearl ji,

Don't you think Sheetal was beautiful enough as well? 😆

Sheetal had dark brown eyes, if my memory aint failing me. It was :Lavanya who had black ones, right ?

Maybe that is why Fauzi picked Lavanya.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Zeffy

Caught you N. So Khushi does know Arnav from work? She was supposed to have a full-fledged career and things took a turn. Come on, he stated it in his monologue!

Zef

You know what is my challenge as a writer here? That I outdo the number of assumptions and apprehensions that come my way.

And my God, I cant wait to unravel and pen WA. 😃

Your reactions will be priceless.