Arshi TS: The Empty Cradle; Last Shot- Pg 24

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Loved it..
Lack of conversation always results in one sided false opinions...
If kushi or arnav would have put their inhibitions earlier they would have bought themselves less anguish...
Its better at least they spoke their hearts to other...

Edited by sasir - 8 years ago

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Neha

@Rabiha

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Awesome arnav was right at his place two people need to make conversation if he didn't tried then she also didnt take any iniciative and i really hate how can a mother be like this is husband is toy that two sis can share and having your blood is so imp to lose a best life partner good job you potray a very dark side of our society beautifully but people like arnav and his family are rare as mostly husband and inlaws go for divorce without second thought

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

U knw ur arnavs are quite different...(all ff) Sometimes I hate him.. really.. But at the end of d day.. No one is perfect..

Happy new year

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

There are so many couples out there who have this communication issues and end up with divorce... they are some times so self centred, that they forget to put themselves in others shoes and think for once... they don't realise what they are doing and point at others.. Nice that kushi has taken that step finally and sorted out everything...

Amazing shalu 👏👏⭐️

Thanks for the pm dear 😊

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Awesome. Was waiting for the update like ages
Loved the update

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Awesome ts dear love it. And happy new year..

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

That was awesome. You wrote brilliantly. Loved it. Would love to read more of your work. Please send me a link to your other stories.

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Thanks a ton for this beautiful, heart touching TS.👏

I loved going through it...⭐️

Dear Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to you.🥳

PS: Will wait for epilogue of 'The Alternate...' & please do continue your incomplete story, '...Rainbow'

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#129

LOVED IT...

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Arnav was superb husband.. Khushi was so lost in her mother's teaching and not getting what she have dream about that she failed to pay a heed to her husband instead she had developed a world of her own where her husband's family was more important than her husband.. felt nice to see Arnav opening up with his wife and presenting to her what is lacking between them and sticking around until she comes to him.. garima surprised me but have concluded this only from her.. loved the amazing story.. thanks dear for this wonderful story. I just wanted to know about Frozen Desires.. What do you plan for it? it is wonderful story Shalini do continue it too.. best wishes..

Happy New Year in advance! 😊