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Natalya Bedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

By far this is the most favourite part of mine...WOW was the only word which came to my mind after reading this...
A small boy's heart wrenching journey from childhood to adolescence ...and then finally to a MAN ...with the only villain of his life...his mother!!!
Just imagine when we get a scolding from our parents for a genuine reason..we tend to get angry...and here for no reason that poor soul tamed all the humiliation ...
But Dadi has always been a sweetheart ...
Looking forward to see how khushi reacts and responds...I just hope ARSHI get closer closer...ahmm get them a room!!!!!

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Natalya Bedi

@Natalya_bedi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Sorry...I posted my comment twice...
I don't know it happened ...don't worry I have earned myself many degrees in these kind of silly and foolish acts

Edited by nalri12 - 8 years ago

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: nalri12
By far this is the most favourite part of mine...WOW was the only word which came to my mind after reading this...
A small boy's heart wrenching journey from childhood to adolescence ...and then finally to a MAN ...with the only villain of his life...his mother!!!
Just imagine when we get a scolding from our parents for a genuine reason..we tend to get angry...and here for no reason that poor soul tamed all the humiliation ...
But Dadi has always been a sweetheart ...
Looking forward to see how khushi reacts and responds...I just hope ARSHI get closer closer...ahmm get them a room!!!!!

Your comments are to die for. Thank you so so much for the comment and lovely words. I wasnt sure how u all would like this chapter but Thank you for reaffirming that it was good. I had taken this update from a story i wrote 2 years back, its published and the story went on to do well, very well actually. I wasnt sure how most of the readers on IF and online portal like it. But I am glad u did.

And u forgot Arhi are already in the room. 😛

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: nalri12
By far this is the most favourite part of mine...WOW was the only word which came to my mind after reading this...
A small boy's heart wrenching journey from childhood to adolescence ...and then finally to a MAN ...with the only villain around...his mother!!!
When we get a scolding from our parents for a genuine reason also...we tend to get angry...and here for no reason that poor soul tamed all the humiliation ...
But Dadi has always been a sweetheart ...
Looking forward to see how khushi reacts and responds...I just hope ARSHI get closer closer...ahmm get them a room!!!!!

Got it ..😃

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metitaliya

@metitaliya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

all his hurt will heal in khushi's love

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jj23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Great update...loved it...y Mohini is like this with Arnav?

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: metitaliya
all his hurt will heal in khushi's love

Very well said my dear. 😃

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: jj23
Great update...loved it...y Mohini is like this with Arnav?

thank you and Mohini's past will be revealed soon.

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nimzaa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

awesome update loved it.Thanku for pm

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pere

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Posted: 8 years ago

#120

Wow, You should have fore warned the readers to be ready for a highly emotional update

This was very heart wrenching. And even though i know Mohini has a back story to why she behave this way, treating a child like this is just unjustifiable no matter what

Often kids in various households are a victim to such verbal abuse and they cannot fathom why they are being treated like this

Arnav's stammering issue was all because of the emotional torture he was going through. One can bear a lot of bad mouthing from people, but it really gets you when your own parents or siblings do it

You are a great writer and i wish you much more success

Looking forward to the next update as usual 😊