ArHi FF: No One Can Love You More By Lyraa99- CH 11 UPD PG-91 27-02-17

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#581

Every update you make me cry. How can someone write pain so beautifully.

Every sentence was so heart touching.

No, It cannot be like this right.

People cannot come into Khushi's life and be taken away just to make her realise the feeling of loss.

Life cannot be so cruel.

I hope she never feels the sense of loss again in her life.

But her wounds are so deep and I wonder if the scars will ever heal.

Yes, her memory coming back might heal to a considerable extent but can she ever be that happy girl again.

Heart wrenching update but very beautifully written Lyraa.

Thank you for coming back to complete this story.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#582

Brilliant update .. I just hope Arnav take care of khushi

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#583

awesome description of kushis reaction on hearing about sheetals death

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#584

You are a magician with words and the lump in my throat is refusing to go down... wow.. you come back and how !!! I hope that khushi won't let Arnav anywhere near her after all the crap he said and put her thru.. he needs to go thru a he'll ride and more .. feeling sorry for her and conveniently wanting a new start without properLy apologizing even doesn't cover it...and poor khushi ... her life has truly been a hell ride .. and I hope she comes out of the sadness of loosing her best friend .. this is the first story where I felt bad that sheetsl is no more :)...

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#585

Khushi will be shattered and she doesn't need Arnav for solace... I want Akash be with her... Sheetal was everything for her... Oh poor Khushi..

I want Arnav know the whole truth and Khushi forgive him and leave... This will be the best punishment for HIM...

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Nimbus_211

@Nimbus_211

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#586

Beautiful update!!!

I am in awe with your writing skills.

It's truly amazing to see how you bring out each character's emotion...Be it Khushi's loneliness and detachment, Arnav's guilt and love or Aakash's care and understanding nature. It's all portrayed beautifully.

I couldn't help but cry when Arnav was thinking about Khushi's life. The fact that Khushi has seen only loss and loneliness all through her life is really sad.

And now she is broken beyond repair. So much so that even if she gets love from someone, she would just want to push that person away from her life fearing that same loss again.

Will wait to read on how Arnav will help her get some peace first, to relieve her from the gruesome guilt. Because without this peace she wouldn't dare to allow love to knock on her heart's door.

Continue soon.

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Rosie Raven

@Rosie_Raven

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#587

Thank you for the awesome update...it was worth waiting for.

Firstly, this was an emotional one...for me, that is. I am totally amazed and awestruck with the words you used to write and pen this chapter...so kudos and salute to you 👏👏👏 The emotions you brought out and wrote for each character was excellent that one can't help but relate to them. It was heart-wrenching and heartbreaking to think back what Khushi had endured in terms of pain, hurt and loss...my heart really goes out to her. I'm glad that Arnav has learnt the truth and has opened his eyes to Khushi's suffering and now he has to make amends for what he did to her. With the devastating news of Sheetal's death, I can only assume that Arnav is the only one who can help Khushi to recover and rise above her pain and her agony.

I had to grab a tissue after finishing reading this chapter...especially the part where Khushi remembered her last conversation with Sheetal...that hit me hard coz it brought back sad memories...nevertheless, I still love this chapter and once again, I applaud you for this. 👍🏼👍🏼 Looking forward to the next update... 🤗

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#588

Simply splendid

And so heart breaking

Edited by Greyasr - 8 years ago

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ankitamishra201

@ankitamishra201

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#589

a beautiful piece of work loved each and every bit of it

after a very very long time read sumthing so different n so amazing on arshi

will eagerly wait for ur updates

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Chanyaforever

@Chanyaforever

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#590

First time reading this amazing story. It is in the middle of the night here in Switzerland and I tried not to cry.., but like always dear, you are the best in writing such heart wrenching stories that my eyes wouldn't want to be dry!
Please continue with this story. Waiting for an update and ending...
Cheers, Chanya