ArHi FF: No One Can Love You More By Lyraa99- CH 11 UPD PG-91 27-02-17

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#561

mind numbing...but beautiful...

the way you write about Khushi, I wonder will she ever be okay again ?

Your writing is just so deep, and it hurts to see both of them hurting so much. Arnav needs his punishment, unfortunately, his punishment has to come seeing Khushi hurt and lifeless.

Khushi knowing about Sheetal and her reaction was so apt, I couldnt have envisioned her reacting any other way. And then Arnav comforting her and she pushing him away finally to realize that she cannot hold it, unless he holds her.

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Kayabiggestfan

@Kayabiggestfan

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#562

Finally you update!!

Another great chapter!! Really looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#563

Your words have such a power Additi, that it's tearing my heart open on reading Khushi's agony..The only living soul who was there with Khushi without being judgemental or cruel is no more..She need to let it out...And she is doing it...Will Khushi be ever over this misery called her life????

Arnav needs his punishment..More intense after the whole truth is out..I just wanted to see him rot in agony coz of the injustice he made to Khushi. I don't even know how will be that punishment for him..Well u must have planned it well. Regret from Arnav is must even if there is no Arshi Happily ever after. Khushi is not Mother Earth to forgive everything,I guess. She must get the closure!!!!

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Aishu

@Aishu136

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#564

Oh my god!

I can't express Khushi's pain in words, seriously, after so long you love a person so dearly making them a part of your family and then all of a sudden that only family member goes away leaving you all alone in this world!

You extract the words precisely to put in Khushi's agony!!

I can't imagine how is she going to cope up and Arnav for once there at the right place to hole when she wanted to hold up.

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anjubua

@anjubua

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#565

Oh dear I can't express Khushi's agony. She lost the one person who loves and trust her
for being who she is. How will she cope after this loss 😭 .Poor girl she deserves some happiness.

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chitra8710

@chitra8710

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Posted: 8 years ago

#566

Very emotional update. When will Khushi's pain end. The only true friend in her life is no more how she is going to cope with the loss. Waiting for the full truth to come out.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 8 years ago

#567

No words of appreciation can match your tremendous writing skill.
Your writing holds the power to invoke the intense emotions in us.
Indeed a splendid piece of writing.
Can't wait for the next chapter.