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Posted: 9 years ago
nw waiting fr updates on sinner 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow..lovely..

he confessed the truth..that was good..finally everyone acknowledged Khushi..but I really wanted some reaction from other family members especially payal..

after reading last update I imagined some leap to show them as parents..but it is perfect..I liked it how you portrayed them as changed but the same persons..

it gives the insight to how a true lovely relation should be:)

Thank you for such beautiful stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very good work..I loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 7
Sorry Simi Hun! Galti se mistake hogayi aur main sau padi! Don't worry! I have done my due diligence and have the following analysis for you 😊

"I never cared to properly utilize the resources that I generically boast of, the same resources that could have easily told me what kind of a filth that Shyam was, and continued mentally tormenting Khushi with each passing day."

OMG YES! You had him voice his thoughts out loud to how he could have used his resources to find information on Shyam a lot earlier. But I believe Shyam was the catalyst. Arnav would still 'mentally tortured' Khushi because he would have to put himself out there to her and vulnerable Arnav will not go pass arrogant ASR.

Yes, she was not going to be vocal with her admittance of fault right now. But that moment she knew that she will not be her bossy self with these two after this, and she would most certainly start this by calling them by their real names for a change.

Mami! I expected her to be reluctant to admit her faults or mistakes. You cant have one confession of sins/pointing your faults from your favorite nephew to change your demeanor towards your targets. It will be slow and steady but isn't the road less traveled that makes all the difference (FROST). Manorama Bond turning a new leaf (or tree for that matter).

...he knew that the simplicities of life were far dominant than the intricacies.

Would you look at that?! Arnav stumbled upon his philosophical avatar and realized that 'Hey, take it easy!" or sing Elsa's 'Let it go!'. And, who better to teach than Mrs. Raizada, the dean of such simple matters.

"You all don't need to say sorry to me. I'm the youngest here. But all I do want from you all is to think a little before acting on it. Trust me, I have learnt it from my own experience."

THANK THE LORD!👏. Say it one more time, Khushi Baba! You learned and taught everybody a less within a WEEK! Seriously, talent right there!

Yes, she was changed now. But she was still the same.

Umm... we all have changed and took upon ourselves to learn a lesson from a fictional character. Change for the better and think a little before acting. #lifelessons.

For the first time ever, Arnav Singh Raizada was tongue-tied and ensnared in a time warp- ...

You have been tongue-tied before Arnav Singh Raizada. Remember when she calmly explained to you WHY she asked you and Sheetal (in front of the family) about your relationship. Yeah, right there. I hope you don't have memory issues and remember that your wife got you here to ensure you reflect, seek, and redeem yourself for her and your child.

And so love does conquer all,

When trust comes with it.


This sums up your story in two lines. TRUST. The glue to every relationship, the bread to your PBJ, the nutella in your crepe.

Thank you for helping me reach and get the Analysis Amina out. Its been a while since I have commented on stories to this extent. So, Thank you for loving it and enjoying it. Onto the next adventure, Sinner!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
Awesome dear
Have no words to describe hw i felt after reading it ...
Well done dear👏👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is probably one of the nicest Shweta fiasco stories I have read.
Loved your take on it and the stand khushi took for herself.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AllSmiles86

Chapter 7

Sorry Simi Hun! Galti se mistake hogayi aur main sau padi! Don't worry! I have done my due diligence and have the following analysis for you 😊

"I never cared to properly utilize the resources that I generically boast of, the same resources that could have easily told me what kind of a filth that Shyam was, and continued mentally tormenting Khushi with each passing day."

OMG YES! You had him voice his thoughts out loud to how he could have used his resources to find information on Shyam a lot earlier. But I believe Shyam was the catalyst. Arnav would still 'mentally tortured' Khushi because he would have to put himself out there to her and vulnerable Arnav will not go pass arrogant ASR.

Yes, she was not going to be vocal with her admittance of fault right now. But that moment she knew that she will not be her bossy self with these two after this, and she would most certainly start this by calling them by their real names for a change.

Mami! I expected her to be reluctant to admit her faults or mistakes. You cant have one confession of sins/pointing your faults from your favorite nephew to change your demeanor towards your targets. It will be slow and steady but isn't the road less traveled that makes all the difference (FROST). Manorama Bond turning a new leaf (or tree for that matter).

...he knew that the simplicities of life were far dominant than the intricacies.

Would you look at that?! Arnav stumbled upon his philosophical avatar and realized that 'Hey, take it easy!" or sing Elsa's 'Let it go!'. And, who better to teach than Mrs. Raizada, the dean of such simple matters.

"You all don't need to say sorry to me. I'm the youngest here. But all I do want from you all is to think a little before acting on it. Trust me, I have learnt it from my own experience."

THANK THE LORD!👏. Say it one more time, Khushi Baba! You learned and taught everybody a less within a WEEK! Seriously, talent right there!

Yes, she was changed now. But she was still the same.

Umm... we all have changed and took upon ourselves to learn a lesson from a fictional character. Change for the better and think a little before acting. #lifelessons.

For the first time ever, Arnav Singh Raizada was tongue-tied and ensnared in a time warp- ...

You have been tongue-tied before Arnav Singh Raizada. Remember when she calmly explained to you WHY she asked you and Sheetal (in front of the family) about your relationship. Yeah, right there. I hope you don't have memory issues and remember that your wife got you here to ensure you reflect, seek, and redeem yourself for her and your child.

And so love does conquer all,

When trust comes with it.


This sums up your story in two lines. TRUST. The glue to every relationship, the bread to your PBJ, the nutella in your crepe.

Thank you for helping me reach and get the Analysis Amina out. Its been a while since I have commented on stories to this extent. So, Thank you for loving it and enjoying it. Onto the next adventure, Sinner!


Loved the analysis, as always my dear👏
Can't wait for more of them on my other SS :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
please give us an epilogue!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I came across this SS today and read it all in one go. It was fab.
I wish ipk ended in the same way.
I really loved the way u depicted Kushi's character and the way Arnav finally repented for all his mistakes.
you are one amazing writer and i am all set to read your other works.

One more thing, I wanted to know Anjali's reaction cuz in a way she is responsible for all that Shyam and ...
I just wanted to see/hear her thoughts but nonetheless this SS was really wonderful.
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Posted: 9 years ago
*I was not able to edit the above post sorry.*😳


You write wonderful poems . All of them were fab.😊

You know this is the only sheetal containing story I have managed to read till the end (Ofcourse in the short list of read stories😳). I simply hate shital.😡


Edited by bhavitha1998 - 9 years ago

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