COMPLETE|ArShi SS:If I Were You Just For A Day (Sheetal Track)|

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Loved the ending 👏
Lovely ending to a lovely story 👏

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#392

love reading this fabulous & lovely ending of this SS

Just want to tell you that since i found your stories .im following all your updates

i have also read ALL your work on your blog ❤️❤️❤️

I woulld like to read the FF of BTSOT (Beneath the Shadows of Tranquility)..can you help me plzzz😊

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Savera84

@Savera84

Viewbie

+ 36

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Lovely SS and nicely concluded. The family ought to know why Arnav secretly married her. They can't take Khushi for granted.

Cheers...

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muffin1996

@muffin1996

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#394

Awh so very sweet..atlast arnav gave khushi the required honour in his family...confessing to everyone of your faults, specially your own family is not easy...really loved the end..they are to start a familyyy...soo nicee!! But ya it would have been nice if khushi came to know of arnav's efforts to make her part of his indian design wala thing...well maybe just it doesnt matter anymore :P

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#395

Superb...awesomely fantastic.

Loved every single part of it

How I wish this is how the show would have ended in reality rather than the track they chose.

Can you please consider writing a sequel to this story...a small SS which covers their life as they walk in their journey towards parenthood and how the family rejoices with them.

Or maybe just post an epilogue.

Thank you for sharing such a brilliant story.

Edited by asha_mehta - 9 years ago

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#396

Beautiful beautiful I think a lot of people would have preferred this then that miss Indian thing
So glad you wrote on this track

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chanellepears

@chanellepears

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#397

wow... :-)

this was the best possible ending to this track <3

ur writing made it all the more better

luv u smitz :-)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#398

Simply wonderful take on the track...

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mssujeetha

@mssujeetha

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#399

beautiful update. this ss was short and sweet and apt to the title. khushi's character was nicely shown and transformed her maintaining her originality.

thank you for this ss. had a nice time reading this.

best of luck for your future writings.