ArHi OS l Things That Go Bump In The Night l A Collab with ArchanaMH17 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really something Han guys. To be honest I was shocked when Sheetal said biwi hu tumhari and all and I was like how Archana will change this big thing! But underestimating you writers is sheer foolness no?
Dream it was!
And I loved the ending. It was everything which I want.

Loved it really. You two should write more. May be a SS or something?

Avanti. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Such a beatiful os.As i first only read the first part i was like ohhh nooo this could not be the end and then after reading further i was so happy :D really well written.
Posted: 9 years ago
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It would be our pleasure if you did :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
What a twisted start and a cute end!
Ruchi, you had me pulling my hair there 😡
Sheetal was and will always be a nightmare!!
Perfect ending Archana!
Take a bow ladies. You did good!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
I remember reading about this..
Archana or ruchi who was the one who did the mean ending only to get it saved by the other.

Haha tripping and falling by arnav was a little too much but cute nonetheless. And cherry on the top was khushi being there for him.

And eww at sheetal. I for once don't think our babua was so dumb.. Dimaag hai unke paas.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Loved the way you had us tied in knots, chewing our nails, cursing Sheetal and then bam(!!) you had us back to the asli and wonderful duniya of Khushi-Arnav!!! A masterstroke!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aaaw...this is a cute cute story..I loved it!!
May I add though that I nearly went 'What The' at the end of the first half with my breath stuck somewhere in my windpipe only for it be eased when I read 'Khushi' and 'nightmare' in the second half!! It reminded me of this ride in Universal Studios where they entice you with lovely music & sights only to have you plunge into the water from a height...Whew!!

You wicked girls...that was a good way to catch your readers unaware...😉
And now the punishment for all the nightmare your readers have had to endure, must be faced..

You girls are hereby ordered to put out many many more stories with equal or more romantic/cute/awww moments!!

Good job Ruchi & Archana..look forward to reading many more from you girls!!

❤️ & 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh ho!! What an OS! Two wonderful writers join hand and Ruchi Di with her uniqueness and Archana with her quirkiness!! Yeah the first half made my heart stop beating. But I was a little sure this was an Arshi story and I trusted both of you. And second half was a perfect wake up call to reality and the events that followed just made me go aww. And a tripping Arnav? It was a first! And I am glad he tripped seeing hazel eyes and not whatever eyes that Shittal has (!!!!) I don't wanna know too! :P and finally Arshi hamesha.. Aww so cute.. I enjoyed this one both of you.. Keep writing more, okay?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Ruchi di,
What a stunning banner!

I have a confession, I have never actually watched the the last episode of IPK. Also, I might be in the minority here - Arnav and Sheetal looked good on screen, and believable that they were in a relationship at Harvard. Ignoring the fact that she tried to scam him, this is how I would have pictured the IPK version, Episode 1.

You write really really well is always an understatement. It is always so poetic and beautifully penned down. I love how you describe the beauty of the characters, there unspoken moments delectably written is a added bonus. I think emoting is tough, but writing intricately is even tougher, you clearly have a knack for it.

The twist is a welcoming change - He on the ramp, mesmerized by her in red, and Sheetal as Mrs Asr has everyone captivated enough.


Archana ji,

Guess I should have patient enough to have read through below. Arnav, Khushi and Hamesha are embodied together. So it was a dream and I didn't even think about it. 😳

They are on different continents and have a tiff, it was big of her to let go. She always knows the right things to say or do to bring a smile on her Asr's face. Lucky were the photographers to have captured the moment.

You write amazing as well, it is has a unique touch. The dialogues and reactions are very apt, weaving them into the tale is an art and you have collaborated with an artist.

This is a lovely OS, no wonder people are bumping into it at night, even when they might be late for work, the next day. The addiction is palpable, only because there is an inspiration that keeps it alive.

Thank you for being kind enough to share your work, it is always a pleasure to come across them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely lovely OS Ruchi and archana
Beautifully written
The first part with Sheetal was a real nightmare and heart break for me. But I know u well enough to know that our forever arhi was coming soon.
Loved khushi's gesture to attend the function and make it all the more sweeter for Arnav
Beautiful OS gals - keep up the good work and try to give us more of ur writings

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