[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: Cruise Adriana (Moved to Blog) - Page 70

Originally posted by: kshubhangi

Just a word, MINDBLOWING.

You did justice to the story. And i wont believe its your first time in writing after this piece. Your second story too moved me. Im reading it

Originally posted by: MDTharun

Aria has helped two hurt souls unite through time warp . She is an Angel aint she ? She has given the boon that both Arnav - Khushi wished for .

Arnav had fallen in love with the khushi that Aria has shown him . He has trusted his love , so he found his key for happiness . his khushi .The real khushi was in need of immediate help which she got .

Arnav has helped khushi a lot , without letting her know about the mental illness she was succumbing to . What happened to Ryan ? Did Aria kill the psycho brutally the way he deserved ?

Arnav has named his daughter after Adriana , that is such a sweet and thoughtful gesture .

Different type of Arshi tale , loved it 😃

Originally posted by: Anu567

Simi dear girl,

And that is what I call a fitting finale - beautifully packed and tied up neatly with a bow! Thank you first of all, for this amazing story. It has redefined the possibilities in my mind as to what you can do with two characters like Arnav and Khushi. This thriller romance and supernatural genre is something we sorely need in ArShi fan fiction. So yeah...I have read heaps and heaps of stories on these two, I dare say this has been one of those hatke stories that come along just once in a blue moon! 👏

I loved the caring and besotted Arnav, whose life bears little resemblance now to the haunted and angsty hero of four years ago. He is content, he is in love and he has all the things he could have ever wished for in a life where he was constantly running away from his past. He is a husband and a father and a businessman extraordinaire. Of course, the icing on the cake for him at least was the fact that Khushi managed to fall equally in love with him and he managed to become her knight in shining armour - a lot of effort from him of course and a little bit of magic from Adrianna...reminds me a lot of one of those foodie films, Simi...catch it if you haven't yet done - called Simply Irresistible. I guess it is true what they say about everyone needing a little bit of magic in their lives. For Arnav and Khushi Cruise Adrianna was it. This also reminds one doesn't it, of how the Universe invariably will conspire to make things happen if you wish for them bad enough. Hmm...this was irrevocably lovely.

I also wonder why Arnav never did tell Khushi the truth about how he met her once upon a dream...haha...for want of a better way to explain it...aboard the cruise. Would Khushi have bought into his story? Who knows, I guess. For a girl who had a schizophrenic personality and who was so damaged by the world, anything was possible. But yes, of course, if I were Arnav, I would have done exactly what he did...keep it secret from her.

True blue Arnav and Khushi as soul mates who conquer their harsh realities. Take a bow, Simi...will see you on your new journey, as we consign Cruise Adrianna to a fond memory! 🤗

Hugs,

Anu

Simi Simi am just speechless.You should really write script and make a real flim .Trust me.When I start read it I guess the thiller of story may be arnav past and kushis past +present .But she what U done actually all the while what ever we read it actually a suspense thiller .Whoa girl that's actually a never expected twist in the tale.when completed the story I could rewind a poem which I studied long ago
The Road Not Taken by Robert frost.

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I"
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

But here its not the road but a cruise voyage that changes this two shattered souls entire life.But what I love the most was the way you put your story.I really really love the angle of story when arnav mind struggled to keep balance with reel and real.Then his final choice he made which changes his entire life.Whoa itz a really really awesome story .Perfect romantic thriller.Girl you R really awesome.Please put your copyright may be if any director ne concept padi tho pakka Teri hi nuksan hogi. 😉