Originally posted by: raji_sudha
Simi Simi am just speechless.You should really write script and make a real flim .Trust me.When I start read it I guess the thiller of story may be arnav past and kushis past +present .But she what U done actually all the while what ever we read it actually a suspense thiller .Whoa girl that's actually a never expected twist in the tale.when completed the story I could rewind a poem which I studied long ago
The Road Not Taken by Robert frost.Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I"
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.But here its not the road but a cruise voyage that changes this two shattered souls entire life.But what I love the most was the way you put your story.I really really love the angle of story when arnav mind struggled to keep balance with reel and real.Then his final choice he made which changes his entire life.Whoa itz a really really awesome story .Perfect romantic thriller.Girl you R really awesome.Please put your copyright may be if any director ne concept padi tho pakka Teri hi nuksan hogi. 😉
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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