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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Sure dear... I will see to it that I don't even see the slightest of any comment 😆😉
I want to enjoy it to the fullest 😉😃

Yay! 🤗

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#602

Wowww

Okayyy

I didn't expect dis tooo...

Take another bow galll...

U surprised me wd dis one... I just loved d chapter...

Now waiting fr d epilogue eagerly..

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#603

Chap 10-12 Superb updates what a twist

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star
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Oh my darling sissy! Pardon me but I'll unres it once I am back from my coaching

Eagerly waiting for that my munchkin :)

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Yay! 🤗

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#606

Chapter 7-

OMG! Ryan is such a beast😡...Loved the way you have described Khushi and Arnav's feelings here. Your choice of words and the way you weave in the story through them is amazing Simi.🤗...Khushi is looking so broken here...poor soul and Arnav has realized his love...Awww! Being through so much in life, for both of them this must be a special feeling. ❤️...Let me see if I can squeeze in one more update or not.😆

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doraemi_bulbul

@doraemi_bulbul

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#607

Heyo! I loved all the chaptersss... What a twist! I m not vry into these twisty story but this story had captured all my attention... And it was bang on! Loved it... Awesome!

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: matosarah
Chapter 7-
OMG! Ryan is such a beast😡...Loved the way you have described Khushi and Arnav's feelings here. Your choice of words and the way you weave in the story through them is amazing Simi.🤗...Khushi is looking so broken here...poor soul and Arnav has realized his love...Awww! Being through so much in life, for both of them this must be a special feeling. ❤️...Let me see if I can squeeze in one more update or not.😆

Awww!

Thanks Ritz 🤗

Your words always make me apple pie happy!

And yo, I will be more than happy if you can squeeze in Another update.. Buwahaha *sneaky laugh* 😆

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: doraemi_bulbul
Heyo! I loved all the chaptersss... What a twist! I m not vry into these twisty story but this story had captured all my attention... And it was bang on! Loved it... Awesome!

Yay!

Thanks a bunch 🤗

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#610

Chapter 8

Simi pehle lo apna hug🤗

Ok now the problem with your story is...that I usually have to come back twice to read the entire part, just to savor it once again.

The intensity of this part was mind blowing. I almost cried with Arnav and felt pain when he stood with a knife in his hand thinking of harming himself. And then I read with a breath stuck in my throat as Khushi contemplated to jump in the ocean. If she need to jump, she should jump in to another ocean that is beside her😉...

What a story my dear girl...outstanding, I don't think, I have ever read anything like this one the forum before...But then you are a writer par excellence👍🏼

Where is Khushi's stepmother in all this? U know for a minute, I had thought Ryan was on the ship all along. Didn't he squeezed Khushi's hand on the first day of Arnav's party when she said, she enjoyed the party...Or am I messing my mind here?😕

Did he just boarded again or was he there all along on the ship?😲