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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: matosarah

Chapter 8

Simi pehle lo apna hug🤗
Ok now the problem with your story is...that I usually have to come back twice to read the entire part, just to savor it once again.
The intensity of this part was mind blowing. I almost cried with Arnav and felt pain when he stood with a knife in his hand thinking of harming himself. And then I read with a breath stuck in my throat as Khushi contemplated to jump in the ocean. If she need to jump, she should jump in to another ocean that is beside her😉...
What a story my dear girl...outstanding, I don't think, I have ever read anything like this one the forum before...But then you are a writer par excellence👍🏼

Where is Khushi's stepmother in all this? U know for a minute, I had thought Ryan was on the ship all along. Didn't he squeezed Khushi's hand on the first day of Arnav's party when she said, she enjoyed the party...Or am I messing my mind here?😕
Did he just boarded again or was he there all along on the ship?😲


Thank you once again dear 🤗
Well no , in d prologue it is Sehaj who gives her that squeeze.
Ryan boards the cruise from Ireland :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
speechless.. u truly deserve a bow.. it was a perfect thriller.. waiting for the epilogue.. will he get his happiness in the end or not.. update soon dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
astonishing update 😲
The update blew my mind, WOW!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant wrk yaar.. it took time fr me to understand wat hapnd.. but gt it eventually. pls pm me wen u write new story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
OHHh 😲
my head is spinning...what was that...👏
really a mind blowing and fantabulous update dear...
left me speechless...I read it thrice then was able to understand the full meaning of all that happening...
now eagerly waiting for epilogue to know what arnav has decided...
of course now he will prefer going to khushi over any other decision in his life...
continue soon...
n
thanks a lot for penning down such a brilliant story...
enjoyed reading every bit of it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: momoahmd

OHHh 😲

my head is spinning...what was that...👏
really a mind blowing and fantabulous update dear...
left me speechless...I read it thrice then was able to understand the full meaning of all that happening...
now eagerly waiting for epilogue to know what arnav has decided...
of course now he will prefer going to khushi over any other decision in his life...
continue soon...
n
thanks a lot for penning down such a brilliant story...
enjoyed reading every bit of it...😊


Thanks a lot dear.
Glad you could make a connection with the story 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 9
Simi, I am on a roll today...OK So another mindblowing chapter, I am getting tired of saying again and again of this😆...But again your visualization is so clear in your narration that it is not difficult to see and feel what you want to convey here.
Simi, I loved those lines which Khushi saying in regards to describe love...Ahhh! I think I might ask to borrow from you those lines later somewhere if I would want to use them. I read them 2-3 times...lol!
So now I am dreading what that monster might do to her.
Dang work called, I have to run to the clinic now.😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey there
I accidentally came across ur work n man r u real or wat..
Never hav read a story like ths..
Wowew hav no words to describe it.. Simply outstanding n MASTERCLASS...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: samsung04

Hey there
I accidentally came across ur work n man r u real or wat..
Never hav read a story like ths..
Wowew hav no words to describe it.. Simply outstanding n MASTERCLASS...


Aww!
Glad you loved it dear. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...

Am speechless...

👏

I love & bow for Aria..

May this angel really should make soul mates meet...for poor souls like Arshi...

They deserve happiness too...

So our Khushi is still mourning...

Plz give her some hope to be strong for 4 damn days...

I want Khushi's reaction when Arnav lands on Southampton...

Did the breeze alerts her...to stay awake some more time dear...

I don't want epilogue now...

I want them real REAL meet in the Hilton palace to extend forever...

Plz give us some more happiness Sim 😉

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