Originally posted by: matosarah
Chapter 8
Simi pehle lo apna hugđ¤Ok now the problem with your story is...that I usually have to come back twice to read the entire part, just to savor it once again.The intensity of this part was mind blowing. I almost cried with Arnav and felt pain when he stood with a knife in his hand thinking of harming himself. And then I read with a breath stuck in my throat as Khushi contemplated to jump in the ocean. If she need to jump, she should jump in to another ocean that is beside herđ...What a story my dear girl...outstanding, I don't think, I have ever read anything like this one the forum before...But then you are a writer par excellenceđđźWhere is Khushi's stepmother in all this? U know for a minute, I had thought Ryan was on the ship all along. Didn't he squeezed Khushi's hand on the first day of Arnav's party when she said, she enjoyed the party...Or am I messing my mind here?đDid he just boarded again or was he there all along on the ship?đ˛
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