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Posted: 9 years ago
Chookar mere mun ko diya CA ne kya ishra,
badla har mausam, badla har ishara! 😆

P.S.: CA=Cruise Adriana
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE:

So that was the last part of Cruise Adriana for you.😳
I don't know how well you could connect with it, or how much it caught you by surprise. But I do know that all your questions will have answers in all the chapters that were posted before the last one.

The epilogue will soon greet you guys.😉😊
So before that, do let me know how you all feel with this development in the story.

I uploaded this so soon only because its June 6th today. Our beloved IPK's 5th anniversary! ❤️

And after reading the last chapter, if you didn't know it already then perhaps this heads up will make you realize that all this while, all those days and nights, who was actually speaking the words in the poems in between the events. Whose game-plan it was. 😉

Will be awaiting your feedback! 🤗

Loads of love,
Simi
Edited by Simi1711 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Knowingly, Unknowingly I'm always first! Yipppee!

I'm so happy!

BUT,

GIRL!!!

This is a CLASSIC!!!

I'm equally surprised and shocked that how could you even think of such a theory! I, being a science student couldn't even go beyond mental illness and you, YOU, YES YOU made Einstein baby look foolish. You used his theory and made such a beautiful story and an it is a cult classic for sure!

The way you described the eccentricities in the part, literally look my breath away, how well it connected to every sequence... It was as if the cake was made before its batter.

Girl, girl, girl! I still can't believe what I just read! But I knew his step-mother too. At least I got something right.

I'm so bowled over that I can' even right properly...


But I have a doubt, what about is it still caged in the time warp or is it still with Arnav?

In the time warp, is the journal like the top Leonardo has from inception movie?

I have doubt about it! Adriana is not real. Journal is real but where is the journal?

Investigation kareka padi!😆






















Edited by ..KittyKat.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Oh my darling sissy! Pardon me but I'll unres it once I am back from my coaching

~*~UN-RES~*~

Oops!!! I am really very very very sorry for this late un-resing. I'm sure you'll forgive ne, karoge na?

Chapter-12 (A)

Wow! Just a simple WOW!!! Kya update tha didu!

The past!!! 19 November...

A significant date where everything started from. Knowing that day's event was one of the most awaited thing in the whole story and now knowing it, it just took my breath away! The cruelty of a beast over the innocent beauty made my breath hitch. The thing I loved about it was Khushi did show her guts. Though she ended up getting physically abused as always, she did stand up for herself at least once not Fearing abt his demonish reaction to it.

Her pain, her anguish, her desperation, her need for freedom... Everything... Everything was so genuinely and wonderfully depicted through this update by an awesome writer like u. The anger that had bubbled up in Ryan seeing his so-called fiance stand up against him and speak herself out had been successfully able to draw his character in my mind as a reader.

What took away my attention was... Khushi was trapped in the hotel room... Then how the hell did she reach the Cruise Deck. That had taken all my attention and I just wanted to keep reading and reading and reading.

21 November,

The night of which had witnessed a brutal abusing of an innocent and helpless soul by a merciless, insecure and jealous demon. Very eagerly had started to read this part wanting to know what exactly had happened behind those 4 closed wooden doors that had taken away every ounce of life the innocent lady held up in here. The brutality at its peek...

Again something caught all my attention. "How did she come up the cruise?"

"You will know soon Ryan. You will know soon..."

When was that SOON? That was all I could think of.

Chapter-12 (B)

Ahh!!! The most awaited chapter... The one that finally answers all the questions as it reveals the truth which no one could have ever imagined. Arnav was so eager to know what was written further. He did feel Khushi's pain through the journal written. It was so real. When I felt so affected by it then Arnav loves Khushi, he would have been so hurt and broken. He would have been seething in anger for Ryan hurting his Khushi.

23 November,

Seriously? That was the same day everything happened. The death of the evil, the evil finally loses.. The journal entry of that day was something unexpected. And even in the last chapter you did keep up the suspense didu *pout* Aap jaisa koi ho hi nahi sakta yaar. Aap great ho.. Hats off... Salute you... Bow down... U R THE BEST!!!

The biggest journal entry ever. Wow! Each and every event was described in it. How did Khushi write it? Was all I could think. After all she was too broken and scared with Ryan's death. Okay, fine she wasn't broken but yaa she was scared at least. And yes, Khushi raised the correct question...

Why would she leave her journal with Arnav when she herself said that she can't do without her journal and that she always needs it?

The way u had created the utter importance of this mere secret holding journal was appreciable didu. 👏 I really don't have words to say anything anymore.

Adriana!! The time wrap!! Two time wraps!!! Getting entangled in it!!! WOW! but does this time wrap really exist? Is there any time wrap in the waters of Ireland? Is it for real? Is there really Adriana? Gosh! Even after the story ended I have so so sooo many questions. Pls answer them yaar. I'd love to know that.

So here I end my longest every comment on any story ever...

*sigh* How could I even write such a long comment? Did I write a mini update or a complete update of mine?

Can't help didu! You'll have to take the efforts of reading my craziness filled crap

But one thing is always going to remain true and that is...

I LOVE YOU!!! MAUHHH!!!! *tightest hug ever and sooo many kisses*

Love,
Yours,
Munchkin
Edited by Kiddo_Star - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm spooked to my wits, simi...
oh my god...m nt able ro shdsgqkdhdghs

type...
because of the goosebumps

oh gud lord!!!!!
give me the strength!!!!

i'm coming back wit my comment, after some time...
need to calm down!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR

I'm spooked to my wits, simi...

oh my god...m nt able ro shdsgqkdhdghs

type...
because of the goosebumps

oh gud lord!!!!!
give me the strength!!!!

i'm coming back wit my comment, after some time...
need to calm down!!!!!!!!


😆
Sure!
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Posted: 9 years ago
😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲...totally didnt see that..mind blowing yaar...wowww...im semi speechless...👏👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: WanieA

😲...totally didnt see that..mind blowing yaar...wowww...im semi speechless...👏👍🏼


Haha!
Tysm! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh my god
oh my god
oh my god
oh my god
oh my god

all the twists, all the thngs we thought...never v thought of this!!!!
take a bow, ma'am 👏
u excel in thriller lyk noone else has!!!!!
pls publish this!!!!!!
i vl make a bigger comment in some time///
vl read the chapter again!!!!!
this s an awesum piece of work <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm awestruck smitz 👏
this was true brilliance...
i can't wait to know wat arnav chooses...
can't wait to read the epilogue :-)
pls put that up soon! :-)
n thanks a tonne for uploadin this part soon <3
love u babe!

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