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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#571

that was one hell of a twist dear ...awesome, too good...loved it...

first when i read the the diary was empty and then when i continued reading, i thought Khushi died...and her spirit reached Adriana to seek revenge from Roy...

But thank god, it isnt so, she is there, waiting for Arnav to save her, protect her...

time warp is an intriguing thing, just the other day i was talking to my friend about it...you have used it beautifully here...

But honestly, i need to read it again n again n again...heheheheeh...

hope they meet in the epilogue...

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#572

btw, this is ekdum Hollywood movie ishtyle ...you should consider script-writing...this was really really too good of a twist.

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: anjs
that was one hell of a twist dear ...awesome, too good...loved it...
first when i read the the diary was empty and then when i continued reading, i thought Khushi died...and her spirit reached Adriana to seek revenge from Roy...

But thank god, it isnt so, she is there, waiting for Arnav to save her, protect her...

time warp is an intriguing thing, just the other day i was talking to my friend about it...you have used it beautifully here...

But honestly, i need to read it again n again n again...heheheheeh...

hope they meet in the epilogue...

Eee!!

Thank you so much lovely! 🤗

Glad you liked it!

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rashmi

@anamika00

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#574

What was that...such a twist..👏

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muffin1996

@muffin1996

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Oh no does that mean arnav will never get to meet khushi ever...! Waiting for epilogue

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: muffin1996
Oh no does that mean arnav will never get to meet khushi ever...! Waiting for epilogue

Like Aria says, the choice is his.

So its totally his call.😉😊

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..
What A Story! BRILLIANT!

Now you know the twist! 😉😆

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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#578

🤪 mein kaun hoon??? mein kaha hoon??🤪

Time wrap..??? so it is all Adriana...she did her job well...Arnav and Khushi r soulmates...they need to meet..she is just a catalyst..

choice tho Arnav ka hai...chance pe sixer maarna...😆 then khushi will be urs..other wise babaji ki tullu😉

I really want to HUG..the tight waala..u r excellent storyteller😳

so kushi didnt board the ship..she is in her palace...but arnav now know how khushi really looks..lucky boy😉😉

so it ends where it all starts...

or in more clear way

it started with prologue and ended with prologue( not entire prologue but REAL part which include only La and Arnav)😆😆..all chapters r MAYA...illusion😕😕

thank god he remember all the events happened during this mysterious time wrap...

DO give this hard PUSH to Lavanya from my side...chudail kahi ki...😆

Epilogue ki intezaar mein ek gif

Edited by lechuarshi - 9 years ago

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Knowingly, Unknowingly I'm always first! Yipppee!

I'm so happy!

BUT,

GIRL!!!

This is a CLASSIC!!!

I'm equally surprised and shocked that how could you even think of such a theory! I, being a science student couldn't even go beyond mental illness and you, YOU, YES YOU made Einstein baby look foolish. You used his theory and made such a beautiful story and an it is a cult classic for sure!

The way you described the eccentricities in the part, literally look my breath away, how well it connected to every sequence... It was as if the cake was made before its batter.

Girl, girl, girl! I still can't believe what I just read! But I knew his step-mother too. At least I got something right.

I'm so bowled over that I can' even right properly...

But I have a doubt, what about is it still caged in the time warp or is it still with Arnav?

In the time warp, is the journal like the top Leonardo has from inception movie?

I have doubt about it! Adriana is not real. Journal is real but where is the journal?

Investigation kareka padi!😆

Love,

Saraa 😃

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: lechuarshi
🤪 mein kaun hoon??? mein kaha hoon??🤪
Time wrap..??? so it is all Adriana...she did her job well...Arnav and Khushi r soulmates...they need to meet..she is just a catalyst..
choice tho Arnav ka hai...chance pe sixer maarna...😆 then khushi will be urs..other wise babaji ki tullu😉
I really want to HUG..the tight waala..u r excellent storyteller😳

so kushi didnt board the ship..she is in her palace...but arnav now know how khushi really looks..lucky boy😉😉

so it ends where it all starts...
or in more clear way

it started with prologue and ended with prologue( not entire prologue but REAL part which include only La and Arnav)😆😆..all chapters r MAYA...illusion😕😕

thank god he remember all the events happened during this mysterious time wrap...

DO give this hard PUSH to Lavanya from my side...chudail kahi ki...😆

Epilogue ki intezaar mein ek gif