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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: matosarah
OMG! Simi, you revealed it in the end of this part, otherwise I was just going to ask you if this sehej was just in Khushi's mind. Ahhh! What a part dear...I teared a bit while reading it and reading this particular part, "The last words I had said to my sister.. were to not disturb me! Seems like she took it a little too seriously and see? She has never ever even come in my dream since then! Making sure not to disturb me, I guess!"
I literally had to wipe my tears, what a beautiful way you have described Khushi's life after her sister's death.
Simply outstanding. U have to publish it for sure. This is something everybody should read. I am absolutely awestruck.
Thanks for writing for us. 🤗

Eee!! ❤️

That means a lot, coming from u!

Thank u so much lovely! 🤗

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matosarah

@matosarah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Chapter 5

Oh My poor Khushi, she has totally dissociated herself from the reality. At first I thought it was Arnav who was damaged, but what Khushi 's mental status is really pitiable. She is a completely shattered soul. Poor girl, how and for how long she had been like this? Her sister's death affected her so much and then her suffocating upbringing although her father didn't want any harm come to her but he did stunt her mental / psychological growth, she must be so lonely that she created a friend in her mind. Oh my poor Khushi...What did they do to you, these monsters?

Atleast Arnav got help and despite of all that had happened in his life, he recovered. But poor Khushi, unlike Arnav, I don't think she even got any help from the trauma of losing her sister.

Simi the lines in the beginning were so perfectly written. What a story dear...I haven't read the song, as I am sitting in office. But as soon as I get to my hotel I am going to hear that. I don't think, I have ever and I say ever felt this strongly about reading a story on India forums.

So eager to read the next part🤗

Edited by matosarah - 9 years ago

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: matosarah
Chapter 5
Oh My poor Khushi, she has totally dissociated herself from the reality. At first I thought it was Arnav who was damaged, but what Khushi 's mental status is really pitiable. She is a completely shattered soul. Poor girl, how and for how long she had been like this? Her sister's death affected her so much and then her suffocating upbringing although her father didn't want any harm come to her but he did stunt her mental / psychological growth, she must be so lonely that she created a friend in her mind. Oh my poor Khushi...What did they do to you, these monsters?
Atleast Arnav got help and despite of all that had happened in his life, he recovered. But poor Khushi, unlike Arnav, I don't think she even got any help from the trauma of losing her sister.

Simi the lines in the beginning were so perfectly written. What a story dear...I haven't read the song, as I am sitting in office. But as soon as I get to my hotel I am going to hear that. I don't think, I have ever and I say ever felt this strongly about reading a story on India forums.
So eager to read the next part🤗

Thanks hon.

I am glad my words could do justice in elucidating what Khushi's innate turmoils are all about.

And about the lines in the beginning of the chapter, well, as u read the chapters further, you will read more like them :)

Its sort of my signature style of writing,especially when I write thrillers :P

Although long back I used to feel such verses between my continual story proceedings can be a bit too lliterature like, but then I made peace with that I guess, and readers too seem to like that stance somehow.. He he 😆

And oh, u just made me apple-pie happy with that penultimate sentence of yours in your comment. *Takes off to la-la land!* 😛😳

Thanks a bunch lovely! 🤗

Edited by Simi1711 - 9 years ago