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Arshi2503

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

Did Ryan attempted to kill her ? You stopped there
not fair.She saved him knowing his brutality.
Waiting for the next anxiously

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: Anu567

Simi,

Absolutely scary stuff. Loved Arnav for standing up for Khushi? I was almost left shivering at the end of that one myself! You recreated the ship's deck and the clash between them perfectly. Arnav's realization that Khushi feels strongly for him even if she perhaps does not love him yet was really well written. Phew...and for Khushi understanding that he will always defend her against all odds was also a startling acceptance. So what happened? Did Ryan go after her and damage her more? Cannot bear that! Will differ judgement on that till I read the next chapter. I hope she is safe!

Best,

Thanks Anu, for your encouraging words like always.

As the story is nearing its end, with only two more chapters remaining, I would only say one thing-- brace yourself!

And perhaps the coming updates may put u to think real hard.

So yeah. :)

I hope u enjoy the updates further as much as u enjoyed the updates until now :)

Best,

Simi

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: kshubhangi
Brilliant!
All three characters journeyed from pain to realisation,awesome. This chapter is the best chapter till now.
I must appauld you for your use of words.

Hope nothing happens to khushi.

Thanks a lot. :)

Glad u liked it.

Stay tuned for the next ones.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

Ryan is an animal . Just because he rescued khushi's father's sinking business and lending money doesn't give him right to abuse khushi . If khushi is in the worse state , it is because of her submission. She has herself presented to Ryan to slaughter her physically and mentally .

Arnav has intervened at the right time , his anger has clouded his conscience , if khushi hadn't stopped him he would have committed a murder . He would have ruined all the efforts of his family and his by becoming his father .

Did khushi try to kill herself or did Ryan hurt khushi ?

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Fabulous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: MDTharun
Ryan is an animal . Just because he rescued khushi's father's sinking business and lending money doesn't give him right to abuse khushi . If khushi is in the worse state , it is because of her submission. She has herself presented to Ryan to slaughter her physically and mentally .
Arnav has intervened at the right time , his anger has clouded his conscience , if khushi hadn't stopped him he would have committed a murder . He would have ruined all the efforts of his family and his by becoming his father .
Did khushi try to kill herself or did Ryan hurt khushi ?

You will find it out soon, in the next update. :)