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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

No wonder Hair Prakash was so stupified by laxmiJi always, she had a some amazing bOOty🤣

gOatWA bOOtiphOOl...karr gyi ChUl.. 🤣

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Simi1711

gOatWA bOOtiphOOl...karr gyi ChUl.. 🤣

^🤣

Hari Prakash in her dukh would have been like:

Tadap tadap key iss dil se aah nikalti rahi... mujko saza Di pyaari ki...

Aisa kya gunna kiya ki lut gaye...

Haan put gaye...

Key lut gaye hum tere mohbaat meh🤣

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..
Well, I see no update here?😭

It's raining heavily here babe

I'm trying to update as soon as I can

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Simi1711

It's raining heavily here babe
I'm trying to update as soon as I can

At least you have some respite from heat there.😳

Its like a burning pot here.😡

And its all right take your time to update! 😃

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raji

@raji_sudha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

ohhh my that was awesome.You dear I read it all in one go.A great cruise voyage you know.You nailed it in portraying emotions department take bow girl.You deserve it.I would love to join the voyage with you till the end.Love your writing its throughly enjoyable.Cudous to you such a splendid job.👏

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: raji_sudha
ohhh my that was awesome.You dear I read it all in one go.A great cruise voyage you know.You nailed it in portraying emotions department take bow girl.You deserve it.I would love to join the voyage with you till the end.Love your writing its throughly enjoyable.Cudous to you such a splendid job.👏

Thank you so much dear for the lovely words!😳

I'm glad you could connect with the story.😊

Stay tuned as the coming chapters unveil some more secrets 😉😆

Btw, I love your siggy pic!

Rains ❤️

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Downhill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

what a fabulous update with great play of words laced with emotions..

Feel extremelysorry for khushi for having got stuck with a beast luke ryan.. Hope she escapes this hellhole...

Glad that arnav realised his love for her..sometimes ittakes just a moment torealise that u have met the love of ur life.. For him, two days and two meetings was all it took to know that khushi is his ladylove... Hope hr is able to take khushi out of the clutches of that evil ryan...

Thanks for such amazing, emotion packed and powerful update... Looking forward to read more...

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raji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Thank you so much dear for the lovely words!😳
I'm glad you could connect with the story.😊
Stay tuned as the coming chapters unveil some more secrets 😉😆

Btw, I love your siggy pic!
Rains ❤️

As I say before am so eager to read it.Bring it on.Would love to read more of your work.Yep I love rains too.And I love your siggy and sleeping arnav's pic always my weakness.Its drool worthy he he😆

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: raji_sudha

As I say before am so eager to read it.Bring it on.Would love to read more of your work.Yep I love rains too.And I love your siggy and sleeping arnav's pic always my weakness.Its drool worthy he he😆😳

Haha yes buddy 😆

ASR is bae ❤️

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

Oh my god! That's such an amazing update Didu. You banged on.

You're really someone extraordinary Didu. Each time you come with a new update, you never let the intensity of the previous one fade. And that's something really difficult. But u do it pretty well.

Are you writer? Have you published any book? If no, trust me you should try one and I'd love to be the first reader of your book.

Anyways coming to the update. It was fantastic. Loved how your explained everyone's emotions and feelings. I hate that Ryan. How dare he hurt Khushi? But wait a minute! Why did he hurt her? What's the reason? And why in the hell is Khushi being so silent and spineless. She just stand up for herself. Hope Arnav soon gets to know about Khushi's condition and that he helps her out and away from this beast.

Please please please update soon didu. I can't wait any more.

Thank you

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Kiddo