[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: Cruise Adriana (Moved to Blog) - Page 25

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

First of all A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY SARAA DIDU. Hope your life is filled with happiness and that u always get what you wish for.

U have got an amazing friend. Simi Didu this was a sweet gift to your friend on her birthday.

Coming to the update.. I am awestruck. I am speechless. I'm in love with this update of yours Didu.

Trust me when I say, I always ponder on how u manage to write something so creative and different. The way you write, the way u describe ethe events, the timings.. Everything is just superb. I don't have words to describe them yaar.

I'm surprised. I din expect to know that the poems u use are written by you. Hats off Disu. U r sooo talented. Bow down.. Salute u...👏

Finally the Cruise is at Ireland. That means Khushi's fianc would get on the deck 😲 And those wounds? Did her fianc inflict such wounds on her? Or is it her step Mon? I think it to be her fianc.

I wanna know so eagerly of what happens when he gets on deck. How will he treat Khushi? How will Arnav rescue Khushi from that beast? How will ArShi's love story move forward?

There are so many questions buzzing didu. Please please please update soon didu.. I am waiting eagerly

Love,

Kiddo

Originally posted by: chanellepears

also, luv ur poems n song selection like always <3 :-)

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

First of All, Sorry for updating this post after so long! I was ill! Ya right after my birthday!I had fever! 😭

And then, thank you for dedicating the post to me, it really means a lot.😳

And now going on with the story, the poems your write, my gracious god, are magnificent. They bring out the 'soul' of the story. They are written with such flawlessness which only a established poet could write. They are so beautiful to read.

I suggest that you make a poem only update or write a story in form of a poem like The Golden Gate by Vikram Seth, it will be a treat to relish. And I notice you even use the rhyming scheme in some paras but to put it through out the poem is to be done and it will become perfection.

I, personally, would love it.

The chemistry between the two souls is lavishly presently and I love it when you add quotes in between the parts. These quotes enhance the beauty of the chapter by a great extent.

There is still a little tension or hesitation on Khushi's part first which is showed on her part but with the subtlety you made her express it makes me awestruck.

Then there is Arnav who is trying his best to make her more comfortable with his gestures, like a man who has a priced possession in his hands and never wants to lose it.

And from the your stories, I reckon you are into Greeko-Roman mythology. You seem to love it, don't you?😊

Well, I love it too! 😳

The wishes of our heart.. The wishes that define... Us... The wishes are our everything...

It is a very apt statement for the story. Wishes of a heart- Khushi wishes that her Prince Charming will come along and sweep her off her feet but her heart has been broken, her wishes have been unheard and her heart has been broken. That's what defines the Khushi we see now.

And Arnav already defines his wish to be forever in Khushi's arms like this. But time cannot be paused, time is never constant, it flows like an waves in the ocean, wishes our Arnav askes cannot be heard too.

Arnav/Ocean- Well, has a deep meaning to it, Khushi in her dreams was drowning in a ocean, I can't think of a significance but it means something. I hope it does.😆

Arnav asks about Sehaj and Khushi blatantly replies, her strong belief that Sehaj exists. Her reality is vague to her. Arnav is still not part of her.

And the bracelet which she has been wearing for a long time must have had some significance, no wonder she wears it in every ball. She was very close to her father indeed. No wonder she agreed to marry Ryan. There must have been some reasons behind it too.

To resurrect her from this shallow life she was living in despite being such an intense soul.

To pull her out of her misery and suffering and show her that life didn't need to be spent in the confinements of four wells.

To bring her out of the perimeters of her imaginary world and prove it to her that if she wanted it, she could make her reality far better than her yesterday.

Khushi is an introvert and is very afraid to come out of the confinements of the four walls, she is not confident enough that other people will understand her emotions. therefore, she restricts herself to the 'perimeters of her imaginary world' where there is Sehaj who guides,understands and give compassion when needed (when her father was away from her for work) to her.

"Wounds of the heart can't be healed. Wounds that are on the outside are just mere reflections of the wounds inflicted within the mind."

Khushi cries not because of the wounds on the outside but the wounds made on the inside. She is hurt, very hurt as she can't tell her sorrows to anyone except Sehaj.

She was feeling very weak in the moment when she found her only solace in the man which her heart chose and hence she kissed him. But she needed him. He is her only medicine. He is the cure to her sorrows.

But alas, she has to face the reality in the end, Ryan Roy has to be her husband till all the things mend.

Love,

Saraa😳

Originally posted by: Simi1711

You indeed wrote a chapter bigger than my update (not figuratively) 😉😆

A big hug for giving me such a vivid review of the chapter 🤗 (like always 😆 )

And yesh, yesh, yesh.. Yes to all the inferences you made!

But when and how and why will only be answered as the story progresses 😉[:P😆

So stay tuned baby doll!

Loads of surprises coming up 😳

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Hey! That's Kendell and Gigi! I luuurrrveee them! heart heart heart! more than I love laughing!😆

Hey the comment was l...o...n...gg due, so I had to make it up to you!😳

Hahaha!!! I'm intelligent you know! I get everything!😉😉

Arey, I'm waiting forr more, I don't want the clues pehle, I wanna wait and have some suspense built up! 😃

Surprises like, step mother wala clause... remember?😆

Ryan being a cheater as well?😡