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yep I agree with kiddo star with each update you never led down the intensity but actually its doubled with each update.And when read kushis monologue its felt so touching I mean actually I can feel the pain you actually banged it .And I agree you can write a book on thriller romance genere.U brought it so effortlessly with ur words and arnavs monologue is very emotional too.I don't. Know wat happen to me I already ate your half the page with my comments after comment.

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Oh my god! That's such an amazing update Didu. You banged on.

You're really someone extraordinary Didu. Each time you come with a new update, you never let the intensity of the previous one fade. And that's something really difficult. But u do it pretty well.

Are you writer? Have you published any book? If no, trust me you should try one and I'd love to be the first reader of your book.

Anyways coming to the update. It was fantastic. Loved how your explained everyone's emotions and feelings. I hate that Ryan. How dare he hurt Khushi? But wait a minute! Why did he hurt her? What's the reason? And why in the hell is Khushi being so silent and spineless. She just stand up for herself. Hope Arnav soon gets to know about Khushi's condition and that he helps her out and away from this beast.

Please please please update soon didu. I can't wait any more.

Thank you

Love

Kiddo

Superb update
Loved it
Well written
Feeling bad for Khushi
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Totally agree, she should write a script and publish it already.

And about the story, I feel the same Kiddo!

Originally posted by: raji_sudha

yep I agree with kiddo star with each update you never led down the intensity but actually its doubled with each update.And when read kushis monologue its felt so touching I mean actually I can feel the pain you actually banged it .And I agree you can write a book on thriller romance genere.U brought it so effortlessly with ur words and arnavs monologue is very emotional too.I don't. Know wat happen to me I already ate your half the page with my comments after comment.

Awesome.
Why Ryan treat her as his property?
No end to his cruelty?
Like every update you share the
knowledge of demarcations.Loved it

Oh GOD! What a sad and painful update.

I feel emotional reading this update but can't judge it

Oohh no.. Y did Ryan torched her like dis now.. Don't tel me he saw dem kissing.. Poor khushi.. Kab tak she has to bear all dis.. Hp arnav soon ll gt to know .. Nd wowww arnav realized his feelings fr khushi.. Loved d way u express what he felt at Dat tym.. Awsm updt.. Love love love it.. Continue soon..

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Oh my god! That's such an amazing update Didu. You banged on.

You're really someone extraordinary Didu. Each time you come with a new update, you never let the intensity of the previous one fade. And that's something really difficult. But u do it pretty well.

Are you writer? Have you published any book? If no, trust me you should try one and I'd love to be the first reader of your book.

Anyways coming to the update. It was fantastic. Loved how your explained everyone's emotions and feelings. I hate that Ryan. How dare he hurt Khushi? But wait a minute! Why did he hurt her? What's the reason? And why in the hell is Khushi being so silent and spineless. She just stand up for herself. Hope Arnav soon gets to know about Khushi's condition and that he helps her out and away from this beast.

Please please please update soon didu. I can't wait any more.

Thank you

Love

Kiddo