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Posted: 9 years ago

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@ lechuarshi : Thank you so much yaar, haha... yeah I do hate her a bit. But she looked too classy for a villain, as in I thought that Sheetal would have some good motive which would prove to be a task for Arnav Khushi. I mean at least have a worthy villain, Shyam babua se kuch seekho 😆 🤣 CVs made a fool of all the characters! Don't worry, a tough redemption is on its way :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@ Serene77: Well am glad you got the Khushi connect, I promise you that she'll be the first strong Khushi we fell in love with :)

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@ honey-sweety : Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! That's true, that part of Arnav confused me the most too! I honestly felt there was a lack of communication in their relationship... perhaps taken too casually? Well the upcoming updates will tell what his mind has :)

@ farheen75: Thank you so MUCH FOR SUCH AN AWESOME COMMENT! I am so glad you found the story fresh <3 That's true, we could have lived without the redemption if it was what they had shown! In fact his first few days of tenderness after the kidnapping had given us new hope! The last line that you said... it's true, the lack of respect was too much to bear - I hope I can do some justice to it!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: AK2050
he is quenching his thirst for sexual attraction with kushi..that is what i could see..but most of the arranged marriage cases have gone through this...its all coz of society let the man to devour women in whatever and whichever they want letting down women's dignity and innocent hearts...here arnav shows his upperhand just coz he couldnt justify his mistakes by communicating he took other where kushi will abide...he is crushing her innocent heart and taking her for granted with the clue of she melting putty when he been romantic..all i could only see is lust...where is love here?a married man should give importance his wife-simple,desi,not sophisticated,not good in english or whatever..how could he without understanding her plight enjoying phone calls with his sophisticated client woman...doesnt he know he is committed that too when he so think that he love her...seems like everything will fade once after suhaagraat and some continuous mindblowing passions and later back to the square one disliking her habits and what not...is he a husband for sure?or just dummy?!many important things have been ruled out in the show...but what you have given,this piece made us think about kushi's plight...so beautifully written and this is reality...most men only look for external beauty and only fancy about girls either for girlfriend or for wife...

Well that's what surprised me a bit - of course it wasn't blatantly put out but then Arnav's sudden suhaagraat inspite of seeing his wife getting cold feet was something that put me real off.

In fact, to be completely honest... if they ended up doing it - Khushi would have hurt like hell cause at any moment Khushi wasn't wanting him - she was freaking out like hell. And if you know the biology bit... being afraid doesn't exactly let you have a comfortable ride... a bit surprised that they reduced Arnav's to this.

Thank you so much for liking my work... really it means a lot for me. I will try my best to do complete justice to this!

Originally posted by: atheenz95
I love this one! Do continue soon!

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
wow, this is very interesting.
Khushi and Arnav relation has come to a point where it will either break or grow.
After readint his emotional POV of Khushi, i wonder what is Khuhsi status in Arnav's life. The patience Khushi showed during their hate marriage to win Arnav heart and love which at every possible point he shattered and made fun, seems to go all in waste. Arnav is a best bussiness man, a dear brother of his siblings but not a good husband because he wasn't brought up by a good and lovable husband. However, i think Arnav love Khushi and even care for her, if he wouldn't, he would have told Khushi like he has before when depiciting his hate or love. He just need to know what his love for Khushi is. His love for Khushi is something more than his desires for her.
I think the reason Khushi is unable to share her feelings with Arnav, because of the insecurity that he will again make a mockery of everything. The dynamic of their relationship is so complex to understand.
I think they both need a break, to know where they are standing in their life and relationship.
can't wait to read next part.

Hello there! Thank you so much for loving this one! It's true that there's a thin line between hate love and utter disrespect (which it ended up to be) Of course Arnav loves Khushi... but something has gone wrong with that love you see.

What I've highlighted in bold has perfectly highlighted Khushi's plight👏

Let's see what the updates bring 😉

Originally posted by: pari_goyal
Nice

Thanks!

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Originally posted by: pari_goyal
Nice

Thanks!

Originally posted by: welcomebro
can you pm me for perfectly flawed...update next part soon...plzzz...

Thank you, sure will PM you!

Originally posted by: mira
wow...thats a new take on things

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: amreenshameem
Nice start
Well described how khushi felt about arnav and her relationship

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: john-angad
wow i never imagined a story written from a pov that was anything but hunky dory! v impressed and looking forward to more

Thanks a ton! I hope I can keep up to your expectations 😳

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Originally posted by: l.savitree
Fantastic start & beautifully written khushi pov.. just love it👏 ❤️
Hope to see a strong khushi & un update soon

Thank you so much! I hope to meet up to your expectations :)

Originally posted by: shyamidutt
Like you said a lot was written about this equation of Armav and Khushi but something about the way you wrote touched me very deeply. I was all choked up reading it. I do hope that your Khushi is going to turn out to be stronger with self respect. I can't wait for the next part !! Thank you :)

Yes, true... thank you so very much. This comment meant a lot, especially that I could connect m y characters emotionally with you :) Well I hope you love the next part :)

Originally posted by: Savera84
Like it? No I loved it.
I am with the people who wants to know Khushi's point of view and wants to know why and how Arnav forgave himself so easily.
Good work.
Cheers...

Hehe, thanks *blush* Well I hope you find the next chapter fitting!

Originally posted by: binduk
Fabulous writing.. Loved it.

Thanks!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetie_angel
Nice start good start

Thank you!

Originally posted by: melanie64
Awesome! I felt hurt along with Khushi. Beautiful portrayal of emotions. Hope you will update soon.😊

Thanks a ton, I hope the next few updates will make you happy :D

Originally posted by: bungeejump
Interesting start! Truly some actions were never redeemed! Captured her emotions and thoughts well!

Thanks a ton dear, I am glad I could convey the story well enough :D

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
The SS made me a lil sad. Reminded me of all those times that Arnav misbehaved or ridiculed Khushi but never ever really apologised or made up for that.

And here he is, being completely insensitive to khushi's feelings, happily chatting away to Sheetal. Which man comes home late, sees his wife after 7 days and then walk s away to chat to another woman.

Khushi should walk. Away to see if she really makes a doff in Arnav's life and v hopefully force him to realise recognise and acknowledge her place in his life

Oh I am so sorry, didn't intend to sadden you! But I really hope the future updates will make you much more happy :D It'll be much better, trust me!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarita_barun
Really enjoyed seeing things from Khushi's perspective.
Arnav really needs to see what he has in front of him and not take her for granted.

Thank you so much, I completely agree with you!

Originally posted by: Anu567

Sree,

This was so sad for various reasons...Khushi recalling their slowly falling in love, their present where Arnav still seems to be in his Laad Governor avatar, and neglects her or makes her feel inadequate as he chats with Sheetal...please give us a happy wala ending? Pretty please?!

Waiting,

I know, I wish I could make it happier but I promise you of a happy ending (I hate sad endings, die crying I tell you!)

Originally posted by: Ajoop5
Bookmarked😳

Aww, thanks!

Originally posted by: Pmmpta
Interesting story...

Thanks a ton!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SushSush
emotional shot.. felt bad for kushi.. hope arnav realizes that he takes her for granted.. is he blind?? can't he see through his wife's all is well facade & insecurities?? doesn't he miss his wife?? sheetal might be his friend.. but don't he remember he has a wife now?? don't know what u have planned.. but please don't make her forgive him without proper redemption.. he must repent.. continue soon.. do pm me.. will b waiting..

*Sigh* True, but it's easier said than done... how many of us try to look into the hearts of our loved ones? Be it mother, father, brother or husband? Same from the other end... inspite of having the ability to communicate, we are the ones who erect barriers for no reason and don't worry... Arnav will grovel :)

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
Bang on!! Every time I watched old episodes, I always wanted to see them give some credit and respect what she did for their family... Especially Arnav... But no and Khushi just forgave everyone...
What you wrote, it was awesome... Loved it...

Thank you so much! Really... trust me that's what pushed me to write this...