Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete*

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amreenshameem

@amreenshameem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Nice start
Well described how khushi felt about arnav and her relationship

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john-angad

@john-angad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

wow i never imagined a story written from a pov that was anything but hunky dory! v impressed and looking forward to more

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Fantastic start & beautifully written khushi pov.. just love it👏 ❤️

Hope to see a strong khushi & un update soon

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Shyamala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Like you said a lot was written about this equation of Armav and Khushi but something about the way you wrote touched me very deeply. I was all choked up reading it. I do hope that your Khushi is going to turn out to be stronger with self respect. I can't wait for the next part !! Thank you :)

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Savera84

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Like it? No I loved it.

I am with the people who wants to know Khushi's point of view and wants to know why and how Arnav forgave himself so easily.

Good work.

Cheers...

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melanie64

@melanie64

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Awesome! I felt hurt along with Khushi. Beautiful portrayal of emotions. Hope you will update soon.😊

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bungeejump

@bungeejump

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Interesting start! Truly some actions were never redeemed! Captured her emotions and thoughts well!

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

The SS made me a lil sad. Reminded me of all those times that Arnav misbehaved or ridiculed Khushi but never ever really apologised or made up for that.

And here he is, being completely insensitive to khushi's feelings, happily chatting away to Sheetal. Which man comes home late, sees his wife after 7 days and then walk s away to chat to another woman.

Khushi should walk. Away to see if she really makes a doff in Arnav's life and v hopefully force him to realise recognise and acknowledge her place in his life

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Really enjoyed seeing things from Khushi's perspective.

Arnav really needs to see what he has in front of him and not take her for granted.

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Anu567

@Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Sree,

This was so sad for various reasons...Khushi recalling their slowly falling in love, their present where Arnav still seems to be in his Laad Governor avatar, and neglects her or makes her feel inadequate as he chats with Sheetal...please give us a happy wala ending? Pretty please?!

Waiting,