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deblina

@maitydeblina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Finally...that was ausum.:)thanks for pm:)

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Wow great short story

I really love the ending and you are an amazing writer and i love all of the characters so much

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous Update
Loved it
Thanks for the PM

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Awesome... Past should remain past but memories can visit you any time

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

It was So nice that Arnav wanted to forget his Past and to see the Present.it was so Interesting.😊

The Whole Os was so Interestingly explained.😊

The Last lines of this Os was Awesome,I Loves it.😊

Please write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

A very beautiful twoshot girl. Reminds me of Khushi, Arnav and the Sheetal saga in many ways. Khushi could be just the only idiot in the world who loved her husband to distraction, and yet will gladly trade off her marriage if she thinks that would make him happy. Never have understood this aspect of the character of Khushi Kumari Gupta SinghRaizada. This was well captured. A great story on our forever couple! 👏

Best,

Edited by Anu567 - 9 years ago

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Nitya

@nik1310

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Well, that was some Part 2...i have been waiting and kinda expected another angle, this does read better than what i had in mind. Khushi really had us all in a Tizzy din't she ...Sanki 😆

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chinnulu

@chinnulu

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Beautiful ending

Loved it. As Arnav said need not be mahan all the time and good to be selfish sometimes for oneself. Arnav will definetly overcome his past but will not be able to live without his Khushi and try to put some sense into his sankadevi.

Thanks for the PM