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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

WOW!! amazing story dear...lovely ending

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@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Lovely!
Without writing the conversation between Arnav-La, and why La is still unmarried, you've given it an end beautifully!
What matters is Arnav's feelings!

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Beautifully written really enjoyed it

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

loved the ending

khushi went to NK for a shoulder to lean on but instead got NK scoldin her

Arnav must have been worried sick

as for Lav n NK crying take it Arnav went through them both especially NK for letting Khushi leave his house

could picture Arnav waiting there for khushi n how he felt when he finally saw her

boy was he livid ...loved his whole ur comin with me whether u like it or not attitude

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Wow I loved this story.. It was so interesting to read.. And I have watched a movie similar to the theme.. Tamil one name's Silinu oru kadhal.. And ha the possessive Khushi and such an adorable lover in the form of Arnav.. I liked how you so beautifully ended it and made them unite back.. I loved this Sans! <3

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shreya

@Willy_Wonka.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Its brilliant!

Write more dear :)

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

believe it or not.. Aesa lag rha hai u have penned down my life..
I m not married but i m nt Lavanya.. I love my love but he is engaged.. He is my best frnd.. We love each other but still he ignores me and is bsy wid his would b.. It hurts me alot.. Bt u said it ryt in our heart there is special place for someone and how much they hurt us.. Ignore us.. Moke us.. We still love thm selfless..
Thanks for xpressing my views from ur note abt this..
Love n smile

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San

@slippedaffairs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Aweesome!!

Despite all the update pms in my inbox, I had just opened this one because I knew that I still hadn't commented on this OS of yours. And admist all busy schedule I took time for this amazing OS which brought tears.

Totally aweesome OS.

The way Khushi told everything to Nk, the way NK told things to khushi. The bond NK and arnav is shown just by this. ArShi's relation is well defined in words. Totally in love with the concept.

Do write more like this.

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I am going to post a my First ArShi writing, though a one shot from a contest was the first. It will be a Drabble Series of 7 Drabbles.

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Will you proof read it for me? No hurry, it will be posted after 26th of March!

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