ArHi NEW YEAR 2S: Jazbaat e-Mohabbat | AUTHOR'S NOTE | PG-36

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: limoncello

Thanks darling! 🤗

I always felt that Arnav should've confided in his Di and Nani. Having been re-watching the show again and again on hotstar, I can see the gaping holes in the story line more clearly. There is so much they could've done with a more logical story line. Sigh! I still love everything about the show though.

Thanks for always liking and commenting.

Will come back with a new OS for the forced marriage anniversary on February 14. 😳

Love,
Limon.

I agree with you 👍🏼 there were lot of illogical, senseless and too many forgotten things and innumerable loopholes in the story.. but we all re watch this show with the same obsession every time we sit to watch it.. that is what this show has done to us 😳😆

Waiting for the next os limon 😊

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limoncello

@limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

NOTE

Hello,

I just wanted to post this note to say a big thank you for your wonderful response. 🤗

I apologize for not responding to each one of you individually, but I want you to know that I've read every comment. I really appreciate you taking your time and making an effort to let me know that you've read my story and liked it! As an amateur writer, each and every comment and every bit of your appreciation is very dear to me.

I will be back with my next OS on February 14th. Of course it will be a forced marriage OS, but with my own twist! 😃

Looking forward to seeing you there! 😳

Loads love,

Limon.

Edited by limoncello - 9 years ago

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Awesome.. Loved it so much.. Arnav called nani and di to help him to win his khushi.. So happy Gor ARSHI.. 😃

Thanks for pm 😊

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Sheetal

@Prettycool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Awesome will wait for new oS

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

The last part was really beautiful.

I absolutely loved the way Arnav proposed her. He took time, but finally made up his mind. When Arnav didn't hug her back or didn't respond to her confession Khushi thought he rejected her. she became woebegone. but after spending two days in sorrow that proposal in front of the whole world made her the happiest woman on earth.

It was an awesome read.