ArHi NEW YEAR 2S: Jazbaat e-Mohabbat | AUTHOR'S NOTE | PG-36 | JAN-18 - Page 17

Beautiful closure...I was thrilled to read khushi's unexpected kiss and confession in last update while I absolutely loved arnav's proposal in this update...!!!!

Originally posted by: limoncello

Sam,

Thanks for catching the 'slimy' part! I fixed it now. This is what happens when you don't proofread your work! 😆

Sam and G,

The 2 hours was probably to ask for Khushi's hand from her parents and maybe to buy the ring? It was definitely not enough to practice his dance routine...given how bad of a dancer ASR is! 🤣 So he must have pulled an all-nighter for that one!

The towel dance!! OMG!! It kills me every time I watch it!!! But cringe worthiness aside, the bottom line is, he did it for Khushi. And she loved it...as crazy as she is!

You're both such amazing readers and comment-ers (?)! Do you think you will write something of your own? I'll be the first to stand in line for a signed copy! 😃

Thank you for liking this story. It means a lot to me...but you both already know that, don't you? 🤗

Such a superbb one..

Originally posted by: scrapbooker

Hey L,

Thank you for your lovely response... The pleasure was all mine. And yeah, it was the true declaration of his love that Arnav did that dance for his crazy girl.

As for writing... it is so much easier to offer appreciation ( or lack of ) than coming up with something original. As much as it pains me to admit it... I have come to terms with my lack of creativity (laughing). But I am a connoisseur of good stories (in my opinion) ... That has to count as talent, right?

That was a really cute story :-)

wow beautiful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.

I'm 1st time commenting 4 ur stry.sry😳
loved it.so beautiful.Thnk god arnav got his vocal cord back in frnt of his nani & di.😃

Limon, how effortlessly you weave stories keeping the original IPK track and making suitable yet familiar changes.

Beautiful finish...