ArHi NEW YEAR 2S: Jazbaat e-Mohabbat | AUTHOR'S NOTE | PG-36

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Really beautifully written like part 1

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Mints23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

A fitting end to the first one...Loved this realization of Arnav Singh Raizada. I guess once he had accepted his feelings for Khushi, his transformation was inevitable. I felt bad for Khushi's heartbreak initially, and especially the way you have penned down her feelings. But then there was a bigger agenda that life had... and I am sure after the grand proposal and such a brilliant heartfelt wish to marry her, she is one happy woman. Thank you for given us this happy ending Limon! 🤗

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pravallika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Awww!!! Beautiful update limon 👏😊

Arnav's thiughts about the incomplete hug and his planning before proposing her is awesome. .. and i loved his discussion with anjali and nani.. they have become his partners in crime here 😆

and the best part is completion of the incomplete kiss at the same spot ...that's lovely dear 😉

Waiting for more stories like this from you...

Thanks for the pm 😊

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Pdrover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

This was so awesome and hatke proposal
Arnav confiding Anjali & Nani and rest of the Gupta
Loved it

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Beautiful proposal... Loved it 😊

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Wow.. the second part was really beautiful...loved it

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limoncello

@limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: canapoem
Limon, how effortlessly you weave stories keeping the original IPK track and making suitable yet familiar changes.
You weave stories beautifully my dear. 👏

The first hug which was incomplete followed by another incomplete hug. 😲

I was scolding Arnav and telling him, stop thinking so much you moron, just hug her. 😆

But this moron did take some good decisions afterall. So cute, he called Nani and Anjali and told them he loved Khushi and so what should he do now. 😳

And the final proposal, you brought back so many sweet memories of Barun dancing to that song.

Nice ending to a sweet story.

Thanks Kavi 🤗

That dance!! It makes me cringe!! Especially coz Barun is such a terrible dancer. But it's growing on me. Somehow after re-watching those episodes a million times, it fits!! That's the whole point...ASR can'tr dance but he does it for Khushi. Haha! I'm dissecting every episode and every dialogue. That's how I incorporate them in my stories, Kavi.

This OS was fun. I'll see you again with a new one for the forced marriage anniversary! 😳😆

Love,

Limon.

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limoncello

@limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: mints23
A fitting end to the first one...Loved this realization of Arnav Singh Raizada. I guess once he had accepted his feelings for Khushi, his transformation was inevitable. I felt bad for Khushi's heartbreak initially, and especially the way you have penned down her feelings. But then there was a bigger agenda that life had... and I am sure after the grand proposal and such a brilliant heartfelt wish to marry her, she is one happy woman. Thank you for given us this happy ending Limon! 🤗

Aww! Your comments always make my day, Mints! 🤗

Thanks for reading and always taking the time to comment. It means the world to me...literally!!

I am hyperventilating right now. What would I do without you? Are you leaving? I read something on those lines in Kavi's scrapbook, but didn't want to invade your privacy by digging too deep. I know you might not have the time to start another story...but you will be around, right? Please say yes! I'll start crying right now. 😭

Edited by limoncello - 9 years ago

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limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: pravallika
Awww!!! Beautiful update limon 👏😊
Arnav's thiughts about the incomplete hug and his planning before proposing her is awesome. .. and i loved his discussion with anjali and nani.. they have become his partners in crime here 😆
and the best part is completion of the incomplete kiss at the same spot ...that's lovely dear 😉
Waiting for more stories like this from you...
Thanks for the pm 😊

Thanks darling! 🤗

I always felt that Arnav should've confided in his Di and Nani. Having been re-watching the show again and again on hotstar, I can see the gaping holes in the story line more clearly. There is so much they could've done with a more logical story line. Sigh! I still love everything about the show though.

Thanks for always liking and commenting.

Will come back with a new OS for the forced marriage anniversary on February 14. 😳

Love,

Limon.