ArHi NEW YEAR 2S: Jazbaat e-Mohabbat | AUTHOR'S NOTE | PG-36

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albmum14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Words without actions are meaningless, but actions without words are confusing.

How long did those seconds that she hugged him seem? Both lost in their feelings they missed the opportunity, when Akash and Payal came in, he failed to hug her for a second time.

But you have written his ASR avatar so well. I believe that is how he would have taken control of the situation. How seamlessly it ties in with the show, and I loved the explanation of why Sarita wasn't there.

So why she was dancing away her heartbreak at his house, he was in her house asking her parents for her hand in marriage. That's why he needed those two hours...clever ASR!

Through actions and words they are finally able to start their love story.

I didn't see it coming, the little twists made it so enjoyable. Great imagination!

Unfortunately, I still don't like him dancing with a towel...

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farheen75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

A really nice and cute story. I just loved the way Arnav summoned both his Nani and di and blurted out his feelings, it was very cute.

Edited by farheen75 - 9 years ago

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

awesome update...
thnks 4 d pm...

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Divya

@..Divya..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

FANTASTIC!! i felt bad when arnav didn't hug khushi back...but glad that he realized his feelings gor her... And he proposed her... WOW ASR !!! Finally hsppy arshi .. ^_^

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srilathas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Super TS dear :)

Enjoyed it thoroughly

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momoahmd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Awww...such a niceee and sweeet ending dear...

loved it...

thanks for pm...

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rulama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

That was simply marvellous... Loved it...

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limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: scrapbooker
Arghhh... you made me almost want to hit the emotionally stunted Raizada when he didn't hug her back for the second time. That is saying a lot. And of course the story of their life... interruptions... well played. You gave it a nice closure L... perfect... coz once the Raizada makes up his mind, nothing stands in his way. I wondered what the two hours were about. You have intertwined your story with the original plot very expertly... Ahh, now it makes sense why Sarita didn't show up. Though can I share one fact with you? The towel dance makes me cringe... what were they thinking, making ASR do that move.
Thank you for inviting me to read this story. I really enjoyed it.

P.S. May I please protest the 'slimy brother'?... slippery maybe... Laughing.

Originally posted by: albmum14
Words without actions are meaningless, but actions without words are confusing.

How long did those seconds that she hugged him seem? Both lost in their feelings they missed the opportunity, when Akash and Payal came in, he failed to hug her for a second time.

But you have written his ASR avatar so well. I believe that is how he would have taken control of the situation. How seamlessly it ties in with the show, and I loved the explanation of why Sarita wasn't there.

So why she was dancing away her heartbreak at his house, he was in her house asking her parents for her hand in marriage. That's why he needed those two hours...clever ASR!

Through actions and words they are finally able to start their love story.

I didn't see it coming, the little twists made it so enjoyable. Great imagination!

Unfortunately, I still don't like him dancing with a towel...

Sam,

Thanks for catching the 'slimy' part! I fixed it now. This is what happens when you don't proofread your work! 😆

Sam and G,

The 2 hours was probably to ask for Khushi's hand from her parents and maybe to buy the ring? It was definitely not enough to practice his dance routine...given how bad of a dancer ASR is! 🤣 So he must have pulled an all-nighter for that one!

The towel dance!! OMG!! It kills me every time I watch it!!! But cringe worthiness aside, the bottom line is, he did it for Khushi. And she loved it...as crazy as she is!

You're both such amazing readers and comment-ers (?)! Do you think you will write something of your own? I'll be the first to stand in line for a signed copy! 😃

Thank you for liking this story. It means a lot to me...but you both already know that, don't you? 🤗

Edited by limoncello - 9 years ago

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limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles
Everything happened so fast here, till the end i was like what the? Ye Arnav kuch zyada hi tezz hai 😆 but it was so romantic at the last! Oh God, simply awesome. And not to be ignored, it was longish and i enjoyed it very very much :) keep writing!

Haha! Yeah. I thought I'll just end it at Arnav's confession. But somehow wanted to give full closure. Had to do it all in one part, no? If not this also would've turned into an FF. So sab jaldi, jaldi ho gaya! 😆