IPKKND Drabble Series : Zindagi Gulzar Hai (Chap 5 Pg 28) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.
Loved it.
Amazing start.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A Fantastic Start
Arnav flirting with the girls that is so cool
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nice banner...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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All these couples seem to be like poles apart 😆 Aakash and Payal fight, then Arnav ignores Lav and makes Khushi cry and then Lav and NK quarrel Curious to read more 😃 Continue soon 😊 Good Luck!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice drabble...Zindagi Gulzar Hai is a cult show of Pakistan and I love it...U named this drabble as ZGH and ur dng justice to the title by incorporating various colours of life and diff shades of life thru distinctly varied personalities!!!!I am njoying it and would love to read it...Thanks for d suggestion and update soon!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2
Payal took Khushi to the washroom and made her change her salwar into a traditional a white tamilian salwar.
Payal looks at Khushi "Khushi,you look exhausted and your face tells me you have faced a lot in your marriage life and how did you get into this torture.Please tell me to lighten your burden".
Khushi hugs Payal and starts to cry bitterly "I got married at the age of 13,my father forced me to get married,he promised me that my in laws will continue my studies and so they did.But since when my husband Samrat died,they told me not to go for college and sit at home and do the household chores.They treated me like a dirt,and i know they wanted me to bear their heir but i wasnt getting pregnant,when i got pregnant at the age of 18,they checked whether i was going to deliver a boy or girl but it turned to be girl,they killed my unborn baby.
My husband also supported me,we even tried to escape but we couldnt.They killed my husband and made me a widow and they dont have any regret of loosing their son as they have already their 2 more sons and their son's even gave them a heir but because i couldnt give them a baby.I escaped from there any how and now staying with my parents.I dont want to get married as i loved my husband and i want to be a widow of his as he loved me a lot and so did i."
Khushi weeps by telling her whole story.Payal stood numb,tears brimmed her eyes and she hugged Khushi."You are really a survivor,they derserve hell(avarka ukku narakattil takuti).[I used google translate 😉]
Lavanya comes into the washroom and sees their emotional hug "Offo,behenjis ko behenji mil gayi.Get some status girls,if you want to shine bright in college then you girls need to outsmart the boys.Grab some makeup and show your style".
Payal replies "No humein kono zaroorat nahi iss make up ka.Bukriya"
Lavanya laughs "First you learn proper hindi first then talk about makeup hahaha".
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Nk comes into the studio for his audition for acting in the school drama.The sir says "Action". "Good evening mam and sir ".
The sir interrupts "First thing Mr.NK when we say action,think you are acting and come into your character instead of giving your intro.Havent you seen in movies.By your this first attempt i dont know,how you will be an actor." Nk heart felt pain,when the sir rejected him at first,everyone started to laugh.It pained him.He walked out towards the canteen of the campus and started to cursing himself.
Lavanya replies "Hey looser,first look smart and heroistic and learn some basic features of acting.Badee aye acting karne ke liye".Nk replies getting irritated "You are replying as if,you are good in acting and know well".
Lavanya gives a cool smile "Listen,i have gone through the state like you,and i am still a struggling actress,i even slept with 2 men for roles and flirted many but no use.Getting into this line,girls should try to remove her shyness and get bold and catch a real person,you can really fulfill your dreams"
Nk was shocked "You didnt have shame,spoiling your image,and it didnt effect your health and you didnt get ??". Lavanya gives a carefree smile "every struggling actress will always keep that in mind to never ever get pregnant and use protections,cause once we get pregnant they will get no value to get some good roles its only the top rich people who get good roles under the table"
Nk replies "Now what are you gonna do" Lavanya taps on him "Enjoy life boy,its just the starting,aage tum bhi aisa karoge" she winks at him giving a shock look.
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Arnav was thinking in his mind that "First time ,first time a girl didnt fall for me for my looks.Its the first time a girl didnt pass a line on me but got scared of me and that girl is none other than that girl who complained against me.First time a girl complained against me .Who is she??" he smirks,he thinks of checking her out.
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Akash was passing by the corridor as seen Payal running an crying at a corner.He wanted to go next to her and ask her what happen.Something was pulling him towards her but he tried to call her by tapping on her shoulder but he stepped back thinking he will hurt her more when he will hurt more, by making fun of her hindi while she communicates with him.
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Edited by -Dellz- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved chapter 2 👏
Thank you for the pm 😃
Poor Khushi 😭
Eager for the next part 😃
Edited by Lily30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edit~

First, I am sorry for commenting.. I read your note and I understand :)

Nice to see payal and Khushi bonding 😃 What Khushi experienced was terrible! What kind of parents kill their own son 🤢

Lavanya is annoying at times :/

NK seems to be nice and same with Aakash :)

I am waiting to explore Arnav's character 😊

Update next soon :)


Edited by Laugh. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful update
khushi past is so painful
hope arnav will heal her every pain

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