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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Simply amazing update,
Many questions were answered in this part...
I loved the beautiful bond between a teenage boy and a sweet little kid...
The best part of this update was their first hug .
What will he do now?
Will he fight for her "haq"?
Or will he convince Khushi to be with him ?
Or will he put a condition for Akash and Payal's marriage ( if only Akaah is ready!) Like Mrs.Gupta will have to leave the home and everything that belongs to His Khushi!
May be he will marry her...

Lovely part,
Eagerly waiting.

A Very Happy new year to you too

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Suchi2305

@Suchi2305

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Finally finally there is someone for khushi a very sa past hope arnav takes her away from all this is the house in khushis name coz of which she has been brought back

Update soon

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bluesky10

@bluesky10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Awesome story

Please can you pm me when you update

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

UnRes :-)

Awesome blend of past and present dear. ... perfect timing to reveal the past. ... Arnav is unable to bear the guilt that he failed her once and wants to protect her now and free her from this hell.. Hope he will realise his feelings soon... on the other hand kushi knows that she loves him but not ready to think about her future with him. She has lost all the hopes of happily ever after. . I feel sorry for her..

I was in tears reading about the little kushi and how much she was tortured by that devil.. she always found solace with arnav. .. Even in that tender age she knew that he is her protector. .. so cute..

Thanks for this long update dear :D

Can't wait for the next update and the answer to arnav's question...

Edited by pravallika - 9 years ago

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Happy New year.

Thanks for the long update, so the past revealed.

Humm, next part will be interesting, as we travel back to present,

Probably a turing point of the story.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm.

One again happy New year

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#236

What I love most about the story is that you update regularly, it makes the story so much easier to connect with!

So Khushi finally has admitted to who she is. And now it is for Arnav to ensure that he does what he failed to do years ago, protect her. Though really, what could he have done as a child?

Though I am not sure why Khushi came back, other than the house and the memories when she knew what her stepmother was like. And I am sure Shashi has left the property in her name, hence his insistence that Khushi look after Payal and her stepmother. Of course Khushi does not know and her step-mom will ensure that she never gets to know. Hopefully Arnav entering the picture will clear a lot of misconceptions all around!

And I do feel that Payal while she is loving towards Khushi, does not really stand up for her. I can understand a child not doing it, but even now? Esp whne her mother is hoping to shore up their fortunes by getting payal to marry into the Raizadas. Now Payal has a lever which she still refuses to use.

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 9 years ago