Ek Jashn OS: OHANA | A/N updated | Page-01 | Dec 07 | - Page 8

Originally posted by: scrapbooker

Dear writer,

That day when Arnav took Khushi to his Mom's garden, was really their wedding day... As he said from that day he considered her his wife and his mother's daughter in law... How beautifully you've celebrated that day... A bold Khushi, is a Khushi confidant in her love... confidant in Arnav's love... A caring Arnav is an Arnav who has fully accepted his love... has fully surrendered to that love... It was a pleasure to read about them both... Yet there were flashes of the Laad Governor and Sanka Devi... Our first loves...

Thank you for inviting me to read this story.

I hope you don't stop writing again.

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Nice work Limon..

Their Idea of spending the anniversary in hawaii was good..

LG & SD r unique na..😆

At last she is preggy..

The Great ASR ll be a Papa & pamper his love for sure..

Keep up the good work..

Originally posted by: madhu1210

Beautiful...

I didn't knew there is a word OHANA.

Now I know..

Simply their love is for eternity. .

Unique.out of this world...

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Simply beautiful OS dear.

Originally posted by: Zuriah

Lime😃

Though u said it was a long one but seriously I was so engrossed in reading this ki time kab khatam hua ..pata hi nahi chala.

I too felt that this conceptional os of urs should be the actual jashn of ipk unlike wat boring stuff they are presently showing.

And wah!

Wat detailing..my heart goes to this dearie😳

I loved khushis idea of pact here😆..ceo se pact pact kar rahi gain..but this change in arnav to accept defeat infront of khushi is a rare one..coz he never did that much.

Adoeable teasing n flirting sessions n kya trip tha. .

I too was HAD MY MOUTH HANGING AFTER READING THIS BOLD KHUSHI KA AVATAR TO YEH ASR KYA CHEEZ HAI😆😉

Every part had different essence lime..n I m happy to come across a an amazing prrson n writer like u.

I m lacking words to express the pleasure I feel to read ur stories..this one just nailed it.

I was undergoing kaleidoscope of emotions from excitement to irritation...sadness to happiness..calmness to nervousness n soo much more😳

Arnav is all different here n so is our khushi..

The efforts to make sure khushi is satisfied n happy made by arnav for the trip was WOWO😆.

N hysterical one was khushis NAKHRA...she is the pact maker so she will be the one to break it...I was ROFLING here😆

Finally it all ended at a good note with a bundle of joy in thier life.

Thanks for pm lime..n keep writing many more..I love reading ur triggers of brainz on arshi😉

Ur chutki nutter

Zee😛

Originally posted by: Sadh123

This was very beautifully written. I liked the whole concept of rewriting the jashn in your own style... I liked the fact that Khushi rewrote a letter to commemorate the day Arnav took her to his mother's garden. It was very simple yet highly enjoyable. Khushi and Arnav are more of three years later. Arnav's business deals impacted on her and lo, she created the pact. And Khushi's influence that Arnav has bended to her demands. It was very aptly named. I hope you are referring to the meaning family.. or does this mean something else? Thanks for writing this and giving us a glimpse of your writing.

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

Awwwh very very very nicely written👏
this ws jashn indeed😳