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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Thank you for pm...

I loved this story...👏

It depicted Arnav-Khushi's love & journey over a span of time... Its beautiful... Finally they are having a baby... Fabulous dear...😃

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Beautiful...

I didn't knew there is a word OHANA.

Now I know..

Simply their love is for eternity. .

Unique.out of this world...

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

its really very nice os
very well written
gud job
loved it

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anukap

@anukap

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

thank you for the pm. that was a lovely read...arnav and khushi are special to us all and we can't get enough of them. well done.

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Lime😃

Though u said it was a long one but seriously I was so engrossed in reading this ki time kab khatam hua ..pata hi nahi chala.

I too felt that this conceptional os of urs should be the actual jashn of ipk unlike wat boring stuff they are presently showing.

And wah!

Wat detailing..my heart goes to this dearie😳

I loved khushis idea of pact here😆..ceo se pact pact kar rahi gain..but this change in arnav to accept defeat infront of khushi is a rare one..coz he never did that much.

Adoeable teasing n flirting sessions n kya trip tha. .

I too was HAD MY MOUTH HANGING AFTER READING THIS BOLD KHUSHI KA AVATAR TO YEH ASR KYA CHEEZ HAI😆😉

Every part had different essence lime..n I m happy to come across a an amazing prrson n writer like u.

I m lacking words to express the pleasure I feel to read ur stories..this one just nailed it.

I was undergoing kaleidoscope of emotions from excitement to irritation...sadness to happiness..calmness to nervousness n soo much more😳

Arnav is all different here n so is our khushi..

The efforts to make sure khushi is satisfied n happy made by arnav for the trip was WOWO😆.

N hysterical one was khushis NAKHRA...she is the pact maker so she will be the one to break it...I was ROFLING here😆

Finally it all ended at a good note with a bundle of joy in thier life.

Thanks for pm lime..n keep writing many more..I love reading ur triggers of brainz on arshi😉

Ur chutki nutter

Zee😛

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awwwh very very very nicely written👏
this ws jashn indeed😳

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

This was very beautifully written. I liked the whole concept of rewriting the jashn in your own style... I liked the fact that Khushi rewrote a letter to commemorate the day Arnav took her to his mother's garden. It was very simple yet highly enjoyable. Khushi and Arnav are more of three years later. Arnav's business deals impacted on her and lo, she created the pact. And Khushi's influence that Arnav has bended to her demands. It was very aptly named. I hope you are referring to the meaning family.. or does this mean something else? Thanks for writing this and giving us a glimpse of your writing.

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nihalove

@nihalove

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

That's awsm yaar.. Loved it

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: shruti46
This was one beautiful O.S ..Khushi does know how to make interesting Pacts ..Perks of Being KKGSR..
and the dialogues from.EJ added extra sweetness tl the story .

Originally posted by: spilla
Perfect

Originally posted by: blue_rose1605
Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: _Meena_
brilliant work

Originally posted by: ipkknd12
Beautiful story. Nicely done. Loved their pacts. 😉

Thank you 😊

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limoncello

@limoncello

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Bibliobibulus
I am amazed at how beautifully you write! I loved seeing Khushi evolve over time, opening up and becoming more confident in herself. I love how the relationships have progressed, not just Arnav and Khushi, but their interactions with the rest of the family. You described their getaway beautifully, painting a lovely picture of how engrossed they were in one another. And finally when their little world was complete, I could feel their joy. Really nicely written. Loved it!

Thank you! 🤗

I've been running around like a headless chicken today trying to get my project out and your comment just made my day!

I'm glad you liked what I wrote. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Love,

Limon.