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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Omg beauuutiful breathtaking ...excellent...u simply superb :)

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

WOW... this is so lovely... beautiful OS dear... loved it so much... will wait to understand the letters, be back soonwa.

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Sona257

@Sona257

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

awesome os!! loved it totally!!

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

simply superb...
well written👏👏
loved it...
thnks 4 d pm...

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akleoawm

@akleoawm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wonderful! Great job! Thank you for the pm

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow... That was one complete story... And I loved it. It shows glimpses of their past and their present life filled with love and happiness. Beautifully written. Do Write more stories...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Mind blowing shot.. loved it so so much.. beautiful.. words can't define the extent of happiness to see ARSHI back as jashn and this shot of yours added so much to that happiness.. thanks dear.. God bless

thanks for pm 😊

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Oh you expressed the central theme of the jashn so well...

In this OS you narrated the entire relationship of Arnav and Khushi, their progress and their journey in the 3 years they were absent from our screens 👍🏼

You also made me realise that someone who is pagal in everything in her life, must be pagal in literally everything in her life 😊

I loved the quotes too! 😃

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

wow beautiful os loved it thank you for pm.

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limoncello

@limoncello

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Arshi67
Res for now :)
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Limon, I loved the idea of them celebrating the day Arnav took her to his mother's garden as their anniversary.
You've given such a delightfully playful and passionate glimpse of them. Showing how far they've come with each other, with traces of their old selves making an appearance. The deeper understanding each has of the other is very evident.
My favourite parts have to be the way you've written of the subtle changes in them as they're influenced by the other. In a very real and natural way, keeping in mind their intrinsic natures.
Their love is sach mae hamesha wala ... but an inclusive one ... ohana, a lovely word for what they are and for the values they hold.

First off, Thank You Ruchi for taking the time out to help me with the letters. 🤗

I feel that their remarriage was beyond tainted with painful memories what with Dadi being a b*itch and snakewa lurking around with his evil, painful look, Anjali's miscarriage and finally Arnav not showing up. They didn't even have their suhaag raat for crying out loud!! Ugh! Khushi ne kya kya nahi saha hai!

Thanks for your lovely comment and encouragement, as always.

Love,

Limon.

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