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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Limon dear, Thnx for the PM .🤗

It is making me to realize that this is what we wanted to see actually yet being deprived of the most beautiful thing.Anyway , I am still happy seeing the moments on the screen.

Love the mother's letter and that touch and he took her to his mother's garden Beautiful thoughts.

Lovely OS 👏

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

One perfect os with all the elements of Arhi

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Its really a beautiful and long OS

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Archana

@Archu61

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Very beautifully shown her sentiments and unconditional acceptance of her love for him as he Isabel he accepts her the way she is .i loved it

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

This was indeed a jashn OS.

You used his words from Jashn and combined it with the earlier dialogues very smoothly.

Khushi is the one who brought true Khushi in his life and you portrayed it so beautifully.

ASR is still ASR but now one can see Arnav more.

Khushi is the same sanki but she has changed too.

Loved their journey as a couple these last three years.

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hello dear..thank you so much for the pm...nowadays my tue and sat are very special...u make it more spl...thank you dear 😊 I loved it..very well written dear..u portrayed ASR and Arnav very well..his love and gulit due to his past acts are genuine...Khushi is a beautiful soul who can fill everyone's heart with love...

love their love, passion...they'll remain like this forever...now this is a happy family...

the banner is perfect..and the wordings are making this os more beautiful...

..their relation Is now in a new phase...thank you for giving a wonderful piece dear..

Sorry..I didn't see the letter translation first..they are nice..mother and wife are important relations in a man's life..love to see them ...the garden scene is one of my fav..

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

This was lovely,

Loved the style of Khushi's declaration!!!!

This was quite a mix,

Right amount of passion,

Right amount of emotions!!!

Great work!!!

Take Care!!!!!

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scrapbooker

@scrapbooker

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Dear writer,

That day when Arnav took Khushi to his Mom's garden, was really their wedding day... As he said from that day he considered her his wife and his mother's daughter in law... How beautifully you've celebrated that day... A bold Khushi, is a Khushi confidant in her love... confidant in Arnav's love... A caring Arnav is an Arnav who has fully accepted his love... has fully surrendered to that love... It was a pleasure to read about them both... Yet there were flashes of the Laad Governor and Sanka Devi... Our first loves...

Thank you for inviting me to read this story.

I hope you don't stop writing again.