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sweety421

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Itz update time buddy... [:D/]
Waiting... 😛 Plz update soon

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Sanjana Seth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

First of all I want to apologize my dear...

I've been reading all the updates regularly but I dint comment even once...

I wanted to give u a looong explanation of how I loved all the updates n the ending of tending the scorched but I dint have enough time to do that...

But now this whole new prospect and point of view of riva and ryan of how they are coping up with all the sudden changes... And their relation with arnav is simply amazing...

And the way khushi and arnav missed each other and their way of missing each other and still holding themselves for each other was exceptionally written my dear...

Totally loved the update!!

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm.

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Aakanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

It was a wonderful start to a new phase of their lives.
Arnav and Khushi are so deeply in love and that can be seen in the intensity in which they miss each other. It gives me a heart warming feeling to see love like that.
Now an important start to the story was the kids. Ryan and Riva have finally come to Arnav and Khushi. It's a new place, new culture, new people with whom they have to adjust. But, with Arnav and Khushi by their side, I am sure that they will fit in well.
Just want to see the new bonds forming up and how this family despite being broken will heal up and be complete.

Looking forward for the next update

Lots Of Love..😊😊

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Anjali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Where are u chavi...

Plz update.. 😒

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ColdMist

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Cuddles!!!

me here! res!!!

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I now clearly understand why you split the FF into two. Out of the 2 part update, we hardly got to see ArShi, that too in just the first part. Yes, they have been time and again been discussed about, but the physical presence is comparatively reduced when compared to LNB1.

But and then, should we complain? To be honest, no. I guess atleast for the first couple of chapters, it will more of Ryan-Riva, trying to get them used here, looking after them, dealing with their share of pasts, insecurities and all that. But...

Mujhe ArShi aur zyaada chahiye!!! Kya karoon? You've spoilt us, literally.

Now that my complaints are done, let me get into the update. To be honest, it felt a bit slow paced, but and then, I understand that this is how it is going to be for a couple of chapters till Ryan-Riva get settled.

Opening with Ryan's POV, ending with Arnav's. Opening the second part with Riva's POV, ending with Khushi. Is that something u deliberately did or just a beautiful co-incidence?

There are many small and simple things that I loved about the update. The family lazing about in the living hall, being one of them. The similarities, that you time and again bring up is really warming to see. And the concern, and dare I Add, the love for h is brother been voiced out un-intentionally was portrayed beautifully. I like how he keeps looking at his sister. Thats really adorable.

Aman, NK and the entire planning of the evening- brilliant. I mean, it truly is one huge beautiful family.

And the romance outside. Jeez! What is that, Cuddles? You've nailed it. It had a adorable innocence, a longing, soothing, mischief, love and spunk, all rolled into one. I simply loved it. Every single dialogue as well.

Part B

I seriously want to applaud to for pulling off such a twisted thing in such a brilliant way. Riva's confusions, vulnerabilities, doubts, fears...its brilliantly written, cuddles.

And coming to Khushi-Riva's talk, I mean, its so...as much as necessary, so is it beautiful. I mean, the way she is relating how they've come along this far as a couple, and how they'l work to go further ahead as a family is wonderfully penned down. For me, you are the best writer around here, hands down!

It is so heartening to see how much care each member of the family is putting in to make the kids feel home and belonged as a family. Be it their educational font, or the extra-circulars and even shopping, food and hospitals...I loved it, cuddles.

The update was a full on package! Magnum Opus in making!

Love ya loads, munchkin!

P.S:

Ever since it has been out that ArShi are back, your poor jiju is literallly going fed up. Pata nahi kya kya karwa diya maine sirf wo promo dhekhne k liye. Now he is literally glaring at me coz I kinda asked him to enact a teeny weeny bit of ASR. *pout* See, ithna bhi nahi kar saktha? He is like, just 2 episodes and you are making me mad. Wonder what happens if they'l announce a season 2. I was like shakkar daaloon aapke mooh mein.

Anyways, yeah, I am hell excited as well. And yes, it is one heck of a party time!!!

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Apeter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Glad the kids are opening up with arshi... Just like always amazing update

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alwaysarshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

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A wonderful update dear.

Ryan cares about Arnav. Khushi's talk with Riva addressing all her unasked queries was really wonderful. The change will be overwhelming for Riva. She had been the man the house all these years. Now to see people caring for her and Ryan as if they have known them all these years will take time to settle.

Hope this wonderful family gives them the taste of what a real family is.

Thanks for the PM dear😊

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sweety421

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Hello buddy...
What a beautiful update...
Itz very heartwarming to read about Riva and Ryan...
This kids are really wonderful...They are warming up to new family they got... They are still confused no doubt... even scared... but sure with love they are bestowed with...They will be fine soon...!!!
Coming to our too much in love couple...
They are seriously-madly in love...
Can't even stay away for a moment...!!!
Watching them this hapie...made me hapie today...
Apart from that they have got this parental instinct in them...For the Kids...which is very lovely...
Wow...!!!
Very beautifully written dear...
M so loving it...
Very excited to read the coming parts...
Plz continue soon...
Love

Edited by sweety421 - 9 years ago