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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wohooo... you are back and I am so happy!! It is truly a pleasure to read your stories Chaitu, the concepts so different and interesting. I love the way you craft characters. Even in this OS, with minimal words, you have etched all three characters to perfection. Was Vaidehi a subtle hint from what Gul wanted to name IPK as? Lolz... The film world, is superficial, fake, pretentious and insecure. As you rise up the ladder in the industry, it becomes more and more difficult to remain grounded. I have seen a glimpse of it and frankly happiness is also a mirage in their world, because most of the times people are lying to your face to keep pleasing you. This plot is totally interesting and I wish you had been able to give us an SS for this concept. Par I know how crazily busy you are, so I am going to simply enjoy whatever you write. Waiting eagerly for the next part! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Marvellous update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the mail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm bookmarking this so I can come back after my exams...
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
First of all I'm very happy to be reading a story written by you :)

No amount of reassurance works when insecurity grips. Words remain as mere words. Something, which as an apparently acclaimed actor, Shyam has heard a lot of already.

The mystery surrounding the relationships between the Shyam, Khushi and Arnav makes me very curious as to their past. Can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eccentric plot and different story.!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting!! Would love to read more of this. Shyam seems like an insecure man, but I don't understand what this charade with Arnav and Lavanya is all about. And I feel this is going to go downhill hereon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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One word... INTERESTING!!! want to read more... Please update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was wonderful start...

I didnt expect Shyam and kushi are pair... did Arnav know about kushi being married that to with kushi? cant wait to read next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Khushi married to Shyam...again interesting
A crack in the marriage already!!!!!!!
Waiting for the next part!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So so happy to see a story from your side Chaitalee.. Wonderful start.. you literally gave me a heart attack with a line her husband shyam and all the time it was only Arnav in mind.. very interesting story.. looking forward to read more.. loved the start.. 😊


thanks for email and hope to see many more stories from you.. God bless 😃

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