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bluesky10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Amazing update

Hope Khushi earn 2500 in two day

Waiting for the update dear

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bluesky10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Chapter one was awesome

Like it

Arnav and Khushi meet

Character sketch was awesome

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: bluesky10
Amazing update
Hope Khushi earn 2500 in two day
Waiting for the update dear

Awe she will 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Hope arushi get to know d truth before she become their daughter someone should kill dat dadi how could she b so evil
Hope arushi gets free from them n help her parents
Awesome update

Yes she is so evil

U have to wait sweetie

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bluesky10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Chapter two was full of emotions

Khushi is so much hurt

She met her son and husband after a long time

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Hardcore Update

Khushi/Meera been defamed and its true that Arnav tells his mum
its time now to stand strong and fight against all the humiliations and return with her head held high

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phillips_2909

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

so many twists

can't wait for more

update soon

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Sydell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Author Note :

Friends,please tell me whether I need to retelecast IPK episodes or continue the story with diff story line or do both together.As I am getting comments like ,"Why is Arushi separated and is with the villains ?",Why is Arnav angry with Khushi ? ".

I like these comments that you are so interested in knowing more about my FF but frequently asking the same thing is a problem .I thought of this concept where I am retelecasting IPK episodes and continuing the show with my style I am trying hard to bring out that "Phirse Jeena Woh Lamehein" feeling while continuing the show to show that I am retelecasting but the suspense of why is Arnav like that is will be shown when I take my FF to the point of Forced Marriage like how IPK did .I thought of so many things to add for my FF like instead of Payash marriage track (From IPK epi) i would put AaHi(Aarav Ruhi) marriage track to bring the suspense out through AK getting contract marriage on the same day like how in IPK it was shown. I am trying hard to match both the concepts and plus I am still showing 2011 9 June track I need to still go to 2012 Feb track .

So please try to cooperate with me friends.

I would like to know your comments whether should I continue it my way of showing both the concepts or should I change my storyline .

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Suggestions is highly appreciated .

Do leave your comments .😳

Those who haven't read my previous update that's Episode no 4 then please see this link .

Episode 4

Originally posted by: apekshash
the story is progressing well. do not get disheartened by the comments you receive. you have laid out the flow for your story- continue with that. yes we readers are quite curious why such intense hate is Arnav showing towards khushi .. to an extent that he is humiliating.
i am sure when he gets to the truth there will be a big time redemption that is needed from him.. and how will khushi react...

but waiting eagerly for your next updates..

keep up the good work and writing.. do not make us wait long for the updates.

Cheers
Apeksha

I am impressed by your comment dear,you understood my situation thank you so much .

Yeah I will keep that in mind.😉

Edited by -Dellz- - 10 years ago