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Wonderful update dear...thanks for the PM

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First of all, sorry for late commenting:) still m out of town due to work so its getting difficult for me to balance with work and IF..!! Full on emotional chapter..!! arnav's pain makes me feel so bad for him:) life is very harsh sometimes and arshi's life is an perfect example of it right now..!! but i hope everything will fall into right place in near future.. hey cant give you a long comment.. you've created the magic once again jigs thats all i can say!!

Thanks alot for giving such an mind blowing update:) your amazing sweetheart:)

Originally posted by: chotidesi

Arnav's pain is absolutely heartbreaking in this chapter. I wanted nothing more than to do what Khushi did- scoop him up in a hug and try to soak that pain away. I had tears in my eyes while I was reading, from when he touches her name on the gravestone to his anguished sobs that reach the emptiness in his heart.

You can sense it right from his confrontation with Anjali about their father, the depth to which this has affected him. Her desperation combined with his furious refusal to see his father is such a combustible combination, and their anger just floods out. Throughout this chapter, you can see the impact of Avinash on Arnav- even though he wants to believe Avinash had no part in shaping him, he has. And I would even argue that he has shaped Arnav for the better- because of him, Arnav knows what he doesn't want to be.

Sofia reminds me of someone we both know- her warmth never fails to shine through the darkness, and her absence is so poignantly felt. That flashback was perfect. All of the emotions just came together so well, and you can see how much he means to her, as well as how much she means to him. You wove together the excitement of his proposal to Khushi and his desire for his mother's approval, the apprehension that her parents don't approve and his resistance to reaching out to his father so well- and through it all, you know that no matter what, Sofia will be there as his support. And in her absence, he has missed exactly that- the support of a mother, with no conditions- just knowing that it's there.

But at the same time... you see that realization when he breaks down. Although she isn't there physically, she will always be present for him. He isn't alone in this world- he has his Khushi, and he has his mother, watching over him through the light of the candle or the stars. All he has to do is remember that she is there for him, hamesha. Just like his Khushi will be.

Love always,

Your Choti.

P.S.: YOU SUCK FOR THAT CLIFFHANGER. Damn Avinash Raizada.

With the way you write we can actually feel Arnav's pain. Such an emotional and heart wrenching update. Take a bow

Omg!! An update full of heavy emotions 👏 this update clearly belonged to Arnav!! The update clearly shows how affected he still is with avinash Singh raizada! Avinash doesn't need to be in person, his name alone does the damage!! Loved the scene at the breakfast table where sidhu and Arnav patch up! It was a light scene but still brought a smile on my face!! The scene between Arnav and Anjali! 👏 Anjali's desperation to make him meet her father, and Arnav holding back!! When Arnav finally gives up, and tells Anjali not to push him otherwise he would have to ask him to chose between him and her father!! My heart just went out to him.. I nearly had tears at the point! Even when Anjali tells khushi not to interfere, I know it was a spur of the moment thing, but still it hurt, coming from Anjali!!
Finally the grave scene 👏 what do I say about it!! The rose plant, Arnav breaking down, and mourning finally, he saying how much he misses her mom, khushi coming with the candles and red roses!! I can just go on!! That scene played in front of me and I'm awestruck with your writing! 👏
Sofia returns in the flashback with Arnav and his excitement to propose khushi! His anxiousness regarding her parents disapproval!! Can I just say I love Sofia!! Would love to meet someone like her in real!! God What an amazing update!! But the cliffhanger ending! Haye yeh week jaldi khatam ho 😉

nice chapter
ohh poor sidth...but arnav was also in a stressed state
i don't judge his dad. because we only understand people situation if we are in the same shoes . and arav's point of view he have all the right to be angry. sofia raizada what a wonderful mother she is...and a beautiful soul . i loved the conversation between ma and son . the past year communication issue made arshi condition more worst ...and this time they are finding them self. kushi will be a pillar for arnav mentally .i think @ kushi's place too something waiting for them . iam waiting for next chapter ,to know more about the dad son equation

Nice update dear. Was emotional but nevertheless in loved it.

Nice update dear. Was emotional but nevertheless i loved it.

beautiful chapter...:) u have written it excellent dear...simply too good

at last he mourn his mother and daughter...and now may be he can face his father...and also there is renewed hope that they will see new dawn in their life together...wonderful update...awesome