arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: anu1017
Awesome update!!!! Loved it 👏 I am really sorry for the late comment Di and not so great comment as AD has been so tough, I will try to do a better job next time 😊
Update was emotional, hot, insightful and all the things I expect from your updates!!!!!

shut up and get out also.

archana, what's all this sorry shorry, i am super duper grateful that you read. no need for lengthy comment, timely reading, just come and have fun as and when. you liked it? thrills me. i am no writer so just the fact that you give time and read is enough! samjhi tum?

hope ad sweet and nice soon.

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

hey dear congrats for new thread

just read last two chapter loved them after reading miss ippknd too much

thanks for pm

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: indi52

faiqa,

okay, jon piyeji shall return to give you a nice big bisou.

aww sorry without you is kind of heavy... but it always was, starting out at a very real and difficult scenario... thanks for finding the mind to read it... me non writer very grateful.

you still haven't forgotten that other one? ok.. i will write part 2, keep your blush and burning cheeks handy. 😆

indi ,

No it is not heavy, it is what my mind always looks for and I make time for all of these deep thinkable things to really enjoy the essence of it.and I didn't forget yet 😆

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

I loved this! I loved how they helped each other through the pain and I love Arnav's infinite patience with Khushi. It shows how much he loves her if it makes sense? I can't wait to read the next chapter and thank you for posting this!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
hey dear congrats for new thread
just read last two chapter loved them after reading miss ippknd too much

thanks for pm

thanks so much, yashal_khan.

two together? aww... sweet of you.

i miss ipkknd a lot every day. yeah, pretty much every day.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

indi ,

No it is not heavy, it is what my mind always looks for and I make time for all of these deep thinkable things to really enjoy the essence of it.and I didn't forget yet 😆

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I loved this! I loved how they helped each other through the pain and I love Arnav's infinite patience with Khushi. It shows how much he loves her if it makes sense? I can't wait to read the next chapter and thank you for posting this!

bloomnskyrules,

thanks you so much for that unrestrained comment... i am thrilled you liked the chapter so much... makes me want to write instantly. see you soon.

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

This was super fantastic wonderful update indi Di.

I was wondering for quite a time that how Khushi bear her pain, her terrible past. Looking an always cheerful, lively and ever smiling Khushi didn't showed that she too is somewhere stuck in her past and just couldn't let go because of many unanswered questions. Sure everyone knows that when Khushi is upset she fry tones of jalebis and never except her father took a step to understand ther agony behind her actions which many found it cute and stupid but a dard is always hidden behind them.

She has always and perfectly acted the role of pacifying others, strengthen their courage, lightened their lives with hope and her dazzling smile cured every wounds but unfortunately not hers. Nobody cared bout the darkness in her life but she has convinced every one in her life that she is fine now.

That's phase of Khushi life was untouched in the drama and I am glad and greatful to you that you mentioned and write it in your amazing story. It was very very very well written.

Arnav and Khushi are life partners, partners of grief and happiness in each other lives. Khushi has always been his strength and I love it when Arnav lend his shoulder and his full attention to ease up Khushi and lend his shoulder to cry out her all miseries once and for all.

I really really love this update.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

^^^

thank you so much, javeria.

yes, khushi's heart had its troubles... she did not wish to show it, she struggled to cope with whatever life had given her and as she found herself among loving people, she learnt to stay happy, create her own little ways of staying happy and perhaps never even ask herself if something troubled her. the sunny nature was real, it was not put on, but that does not mean she had no sadness... her stars. such a sign of someone coping in my eyes. beautifully coping, but coping nonetheless. and her dm... there too a need for something she can hold onto. of course, her jalebi frying, her nonstop talking or eating when hassled... in many places her vulnerabilities were seen. till asr came along, i don't think she claimed anyone in her life with full haq, right., he is that one man... maybe that in itself allows her to let her feelings show, even when they are not sunny and pretty... though she would rather not hassle anyone with her own sadness. to him though and with him, she is all of herself... as he is with her. the terrible truth that is now before her. breaks her defence of so many years and she can't pretend it's all ok... there is one man who knows what such feelings are, one man who cares for her perhaps more than his won life, and understands her and wants to make it alright... i am glad that man is asr.
i am grateful that you loved the chapter so much.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

hi everyone,

ad crowding pretty badly and messing with schedules.

last few days at work.

am dying to write what khushi did in rani country, but alas this shyam like twitching of time.

in case you don't see an update this week, please forgive.

will be back next week... yay... no more office... lots of asr khushi time.

thanks for reading and putting up with the serious air of this one.